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Finally, the last of his semen trickled out of him, dripping onto her shaped pussy as she lay before him. Her eyes were closed, she was smiling.
"That was well, nice. And thanks for not cumming inside me." she whispered, as they cleaned themselves off. He kissed her smiling lips softly.
She grabbed her panties, hustling out of the room with the dainty thing still in her hand.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoThere were “major” continuity issues throughout this story. Sometimes within the same paragraph. And while the premise was fine, the story is also unfinished. It isn’t worthy of five stars due to the errors and not due to the racial bias of either the author or readers. That being said a story can be arousing without being perfect. If you like a story vote high, if you don’t, then vote low. It should never degenerate into A SHOUTING MATCH!! All caps make you look immature and undereducated.
This author needs an unbiased editor that can point out not just spelling errors but plot and continuity errors as well. Good luck in your future endeavors.
SweetNothingsAndBeyondalmost 3 years agoEXCELLENT STORY!
5 STAR WITHOUT DOUBT!
RUPANITA IS ONE OF MY BIGGEST INSPIRATIONS TO GET INTO WRITING LW STORIES FOR LITEROTICA.
SHE IS AN INSTITUTION BY HERSELF SO FAR AS INDIAN LW STORIES ARE CONCERNED.
I DO FULLY AGREE TO THE ANONYMOUS COMMENT ON 26thNC... HE IS ALWAYS A SPOILING CHARACTER... VERY BIASED... VERY PARTIAL... VERY PATHETIC IN HIS CHEAP AND ONE-SIDED COMMENTS..
MY SIMPLE REQUEST TO ALL SUCH READERS IS THAT, IF YOU DON'T LIKE A WRITER'S STORIES, YOU HAVE THE 'VETO' OF NOT WRITING HIS / HER STORIES. BUT I VERY STRONGLY CONDEMN THEIR ACTS OF READING THEIR STORIES AGAIN AND AGAIN AND THEN GIVING ALL TYPES OF ROTTEN AND FILTHY COMMENTS. NOT DONE. ONCE IS A MISTAKE, TWICE IS A MISCHIEF! A MISCHIVIOUS MIND IS A DEVIL'S WORKSHOP!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoContrary to what 26thNC 05/16/19 said, I think that Desi women in general & Desi wives in particular are the best.
The following is a true account of how my marriage was gradually changing to the better:
As I read the story I imagined I was the husband's character & my wife was my wife. It was the mother of all my erotic fantasies to share my wife with other men.
I was elated, I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts, whenever I noticed a man was (or men were) attracted to her.
She used to tell me everything, who was hitting on her, who she believed had the hots for her; she would tell me about all the compliments she got. She used to tell me I was the love of her life, & her husband, & her "bestest" friend, & her confidant.
She got promoted at work to a position where air travel with overnight stay was a part of her job (conferences, trade shows, visiting local offices...)
I started to buy her sexy-cum-classy lingerie & bathing suits. I made sure she takes the stuff with her. She would say, "OMG I love it. But let's keep it @ home, silly, nobody but you will ever see it on me. May be just the bathing suits..." I wouldn't have any of that & she started to take the stuff with her.
She would still tell me when a man had made a move on her.
One night in bed when our daughter was on a school trip, we first made love & after that, she put her head on my chest & said, " I really love the lingerie you are buying me. You choose it with love & good taste. I think I know why you are buying it, & you must tell me if i am right or wrong... You know that deep down I am shy and lacking self confidence. You want me to feel as comfortable as I can if i ever undress in front of another man. Am I right?" I tod her she was & French kissed her like there was no tomorrow. I did not know my tongue can stretch that much.
"Will you stop loving me?"
I did not reply. I had a bigger-than-usual raging erection by then. I put her legs over my shoulders & started to pound into her like a man possessed. The pounding continued until she asked me that she be on top. I was still in her, she was gently moving her body in all directions while kissing me & telling me how much she loved me.
Fast forward 15 years.
We are still TOGETHER & IN LOVE. She still tells me I am the love of her life, & her husband, & her 'bestest' friend, & her confidant!
26thNCalmost 5 years agoWhat else would you expect of an Indian wife? If Indian LW writers can be believed, they are the world's biggest whores.
Anonymousover 9 years agoANJALI IS A KEEPER.
AMIT IS VERY FORTUNATE TO BE HER HUSBAND. SHE'LL MAKE HIM HAPPY!
DILEEP IS A LUCKY M°^§€Г-F¥©K€Г WHO'S GOT MORE LUCK THEN BRAINS.
Dileep is their family friend and they all must maintain that precious friendship.
Anjali is a catch. If she is happy her husband will be happy!
