- Non-Erotic
- Innocence
- Page 3
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Click hereAl took Pete's hand and led him out, turning as she left.
"I'm going to tell him," she said nodding.
Sara and I just looked at her.
"Everything?"
"Everything." She said with a finality.
We heard the door shut and I took Sara downstairs. We made tea and toast, I tuned into a news channel. An hour or so later Pete came down. We stood as he came in, He man hugged me then wrapped Sara in his arms, kissing her head.
"Thank you for what you did for Al, I mean it, not many brothers would care that much for their sister. " He broke down and we took turns to hug and hold him.
Tom had raped Al and boasted about it to Mum, saying how she begged him for it. How he made her a baby and she would be his forever, overcome with anger and remorse she had OD'ed and we arrived too late to save her, luckily Al wasn't pregnant with Tom's child. However It was all too much for her and it tore her apart, she had a total meltdown. The rest is, as they say, history.
Oh and Tom had a crisis of conscience. He left his girlfriend suddenly one night and took himself off to a cheap motel that had no CCTV. It was quiet, discreet and no questions were asked about luggage. How'd he die, well he cut his cock and balls off and bled out.
- COMMENTS
EastCoaster1about 1 year agoI gave it a 3 for the beginning part.
But an - almost - repetition of the first page and run to a hospital for Mum's suicide attempt with the course ftom there was ultra confusing and made no sense. I'm writing this before reading the next part intentionally and hoping that it will ultimately make more sense than it does so far.
The story has/had some good promise, but the unexplained last 5 or 6 paragraphs wounded it in my opinion.
Maybe the next part will tie it all together so it makes sense and gets the 5 that I think it would have had.
oldtwitabout 1 year agoI really had trouble following this, forgetting the miss spelled words, words left out, it jumped about and was just so rushed at the end
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoDid I miss something. In the first part of the story, mum was warm but unresponsive, but survived the overdose. Near the end of the story, mum died on the way to the hospital. Was there a second suicide attempt?
