Inside Out

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SimonO
SimonO
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Good lord I do not mind at all. The problem for me wasn't in what she asked. It was how I could control myself.

I brought the towel up to her upper back and shoulders and carefully dried her skin. I could feel the shape of her body beneath the towel as I gently moved it around, but I tried to be careful to not go too far. My fingers moved the towel along her sides and then to her lower back.

I tried to remain respectful and didn't go lower. "Underwear now?" I asked as I put the towel aside, never taking my eyes off of her perfect body.

She glanced over and smiled, catching me looking. "Yes, please." She pointed to a small drawer in the bottom of the desk. Yep, the underwear drawer.

I pulled out a pair (they were all identical) and kneeled behind her. I slowly snaked her feet through the holes and slid the thong up her amazing legs to her perfect bottom.

She slowly turned around as I stood and my eyes immediately wanted to drop to her bare chest, but I desperately kept them on her eyes. She smiled at me as she watched me strain.

Her smile grew in silence as she studied my eyes.

'What was that I heard behind me?" She turned her head to look at the porthole window in an obvious invitation to me. And I took it. Her breasts were not super large. They were just simply perfect. It came as no surprise that a woman like her would be hiding that.

"Hmm . . I have no idea what that was . .I guess I should turn back to face you now."

And she did. To find my eyes innocently staring at hers. And then we couldn't help it as we both just laughed.

"All good?" She asked with a single eyebrow raised, her eyes smiling as much as her lips.

"All good." I responded with a grin.

She glanced down and then back up at me, "although if you need a few minutes in your cabin, I'd understand." And with that she walked past me with a little swish in her step.

And I looked down, blushing, thinking that she had a very good point.

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gunmakergunmakerover 2 years ago

OK slacker! Is it just that you don't know where to go from here or is it you are a serious procrastinator? Either way, let's get with it. Seriously, it's a good story and well worth the time and effort. Please?

TezpTezpover 2 years ago

I have just found this storey, I know it’s one of your older ones, it like most of your work, it’s really good. If you have chance, it would really need one or two additional chapters, please!

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallalmost 3 years ago

I have to add my voice to those asking for more chapters in this storyline. It was really kinda fun. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You really must continue

Having just re-read this story (first time seems so long ago), I think you should find teh time and the inspiration to add more chapters to the tale.

Bran's character, I feel, is on the cusp of changing a bit. As he and Sage become closer, he can begin to become more confident around her. Yes, he will always be awe of her appearance, but I suspect if they have a couple of weeks together, then their relationship can develop.

Regarding another reader's comment, if the injuries are severe localised burns, and they have been treated with pain meds and cleaned up, then a day or two and Sage would be able to do some things. Maybe even function well enough to brainstorm with Bran to see what they could do to enhance their chance of survival.

It would, of course, be interesting to find out what the pirates were after and whether or not the sickly former tech had something to do with it the raid (by passing the info).

Keep up the good work, and get writing!!!!

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BluePixieGirlBluePixieGirlover 4 years ago
Write more!

Please please please finish this!! I need more!

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