by rshyam
This is such a stupid lame crappy story.
Couple meet other couples and have sex with every possible combination.
The sex scenes are not described very well either.
AVOID IT.
Description of a sex scene seems redundant when readers can paint it with their own imganination through the hot and juicy dialogues. It's a new style in arousing readers' passion....
U write very well. We'll wait for the second part with more international couples ....