Intimate Blackout

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She simply said, 'because I'm being watched'.

I knew now what she meant, and I had the feeling I was being watched and evaluated as well. It kept me focused. Thanks dad.

We arrived home and Jade dug her fingers out of the dash padding. "God Jack, I've paid money for less scary rides than that." I grinned over at her and she shook her gorgeous head and extracted herself from the vehicle. "Next time I'm walking. Twenty miles in heels has gotta be less stress!"

A car horn frightened the shit out of me! I clambered out and raised the Ray Bans. The black Lamborghini Gallardo sat demonically behind me; a present from my mom to Jessica on her 21st birthday. The door raised and two impossibly long legs swiveled out, and equally impossible heels contacted the flagstones. Jess was likely the second most gorgeous female on the planet, eclipsed marginally (in my mind) only by her little sister. Jess's breasts were half watermelons encased in a shiny red plastic looking vest and trying desperately to escape to freedom. Those legs and her bum appeared painted in black and the material shimmered almost translucently. Her reflective sunglasses hid those blue eyes that I knew were smiling at me.

"Hey there big boy, happy birthday!" She flicked her golden hair back and pecked my cheek in greeting. Jess offered her elbow as did my Jade and together we bounced bums up the entrance stairs and into the foyer. I was buzzing!

My cake was ridiculous and a fire station wouldn't have doused that bonfire! What hope did my poor heaving lungs have! Mom handed me an envelope and said happy birthday. It was a simple deed, signed by my father. It was worth about twenty billion dollars.

"I have an announcement to make. Um..." I turned to face Jade. She smiled and winked. Fuck! I went weak at the knees and reached into my pocket. "Um, Jade, um, you know how much I love you beautiful." It was a stutter. She grinned. I dropped to my knee before her and sucked in a gut full of courage. "Would you consent to be my wife?" I was going glassy eyed and I tried to blink away the saltiness. I opened the little box and the rock glinted up at her. The bloody carrots paled in her presence.

"Oh Jack, it's really beautiful. She smiled warmly."Thank you beautiful boy."

I felt faint. Everyone cheered.

I think I heard angels singing...

Thanks dad.

THE END.

*****

I hope you all enjoyed. Cheers, ARCH. (Next to Arch Stanton and still unknown.) Ref; The good, the bad and the ugly.

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PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore198127 days ago

No likable characters you made it sound like a couple of them were slaves like you are living in the days slavery was a thing you Made the dying man a cuck bitch as well as well as making it sound like the son was you also made it sound like the son was gay by saying the three of them bounced their bums up the path only women and gay guys do that shit honestly this was just pathetic and shouldn't even be allowed on this site

LadyLoreLadyLore27 days ago

Nothing about this was happy ending for anyone the 2 women characters wasn't likable the husband who died from cancer died a cuck little wimp so you took his man hood away and what's up with the pet and owner bullshit that made it even worse I mean seriously are you thinking you live in the days when slavery was around cause you made it sound like 1 of the women was a slave to everyone and you made it sound like jack Jr was a slave and a cuck bitch like you made his father before he died

6King6King8 months ago

⭐⭐ What a fucked up shit show story.

Bham487Bham4878 months ago

Isn’t Angel the boss? She the one who owns everything well until her kid turns 21?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This just.. wasn't good? Nothing about this is happy or even remotely close to good.

This whole story boils down to "lying Gold diggers win because smart guys are naive cucks"

She's borderline evil and gets a pat on the back and a good job. Was actually a miserable read.

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