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Click hereIn my heart, I am scared. I have never been in love before. But I still know that this is it; that no matter what happened, we will sail through. As she held me tight to her, I know this instant that this is what I want. This is where I want to be; beside Bette, under Bette, on top of Bette and inside Bette. I have never felt like this in my whole life, so I know that finally that I've come home and this is definitely it.
THE END...
Sometimes I feel like I'm a soulless robot, until I read a story like this... The humanity, passion, the love in Ijay's stories help break down my barriers, and I can't help but feel. A beautiful writer!
A very touching & romantic love story! You have a wonderful style & look forward to reading more of your stories like this.
All These Professional Writers & English Professors
Miss The Point.
You've Written A Wonderful Love Story. And
If I Quit Crying. I May Read It All Over Again.
Thank You For Such A Wonderful Love Story !
Kisses
Nadia's fear, her belief she's unlovable, and her enormous psychic torment are so palpable in your exceptional story. Bette's compassion, understanding, and willingness to love Nadia through her struggle, fear and anxiety are well rendered. The story felt very personal, autobiographical, perhaps because you did such a good job having it seem so believable. Thank you.
Proofreading and editing would make your words read more smoothly, and add clarity in several places.