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I couldn't take my eyes off these lovely women. Beautiful, expressive faces with sparkling eyes and seductive smiles framed by shining hair. Slender bodies and proud, jutting breasts. Long, supple legs. Pert, rounded bottoms. All three were gorgeous. But Joanne, well, for me there was no comparison. Her eyes met mine with a crystal clarity and depth that stopped my breath.
"Now we are naked, Master. But we can't get at you properly with you in all those clothes." She bit her lower lip, teasingly, and languidly drew one hand down her cheek, over a breast, caressing the nipple, and sexily down to a thigh. "What shall we do about that?"
I swallowed, and gripped the arms of the chair. I was unbelievably turned on, but now also somewhat apprehensive. What were these gorgeous, naked, sexy women going to do now? My throbbing, urgent manhood certainly knew what is wanted next, but somehow I suspected it was not going to be that easy...
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Hi! The next chapter is coming very soon. I really appreciate any feedback, and hearing if you like this story. If you do, please would you consider voting? Thanks
- COMMENTS
gorsonabout 8 years agoAuthorThank you: "Superb erotica" and "One of the most erotic stories I have ever read" - I was thrilled to read those comments! And time and place are coming in a couple of chapters...
Anonymousabout 8 years agoOne of the most erotic stories I have ever read. Your slavegirls are so well described and they react like true slaves to the curt commands. A sense of time and place could be useful, and the way the slavegirls were suddenly clothed in one scene broke the spell slightly, but these are minor gripes to an overall very well written series. Hope you expand it's scope and continue for many more chapters!
gorsonabout 8 years agoAuthorReally appreciate the feedback - comments and votes do motivate me to write, and it seems less than 1 in 100 readers do either. I agree on pacing. Part of that may be because I broke this chapter into two - for logistical reasons but maybe a mistake - the next part is already submitted, so should be out very soon.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoSometimes the pace seems a little stilted, but I find myself curious as to where you are taking it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
