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Grayson had made it back to the apartment safely and after calling Arabeth to make sure she'd made it in safely, he decided to get ready for bed since work would be coming early morning.
♪ I say high, you say low
You say why, and I say I don't know, oh no
You say goodbye and I say hello...♪
Just as he was settling into bed, his phone went off and he grabbed it from the bedside table. Not even bothering to check the I.D., he answered. "Grayson."
"Hi, it's me... Can we talk? I miss you... so much."
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Ready for Ch. 04!!!
Oh my! I'm guessing that's Grayson's ex calling him. I love the chemistry between Arabeth and Grayson. Please put out Ch. 04 soon!
loving it!
Your awesome!! .. The characters are very well written... Love this story so far .. Keep it up looking forward to your next installment .....
Well...
I wouldn't go THAT far. I don't like Gray's taste in music. More of a metal head, myself. \m/
BDP loves Amaranthe and Holyhell, too. Just thought I'd share that. Hell, she got ME into Amaranthe, even though I'm not a huge fan of pop. Ok, she just smacked me upside the head and corrected me. It's pop-metal. Go figure! She also has a crush on James Hetfield. :P
But, I have to say that this is a great tale so far, and please keep it moving! My wife and I love the fast pace of getting it written and posted. Editing would be a plus, but don't worry about it too much. It's still a great tale the way it is. :)
5 Solid Stars. Looking forward to the next one, too.more...
YUMMMMMMYYYYYY!!!!! 5*
Grayson reminds me of my hubby. They have very similar wit and sense of humor. ^^
You really do need an editor, it would be so much better if it was edited.
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