It Did Balance, Didn't it? Ch. 01

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Showered, drained, a douche, Debbie shuffled out of the bathroom. Collapsing onto the bed, she cuddled up close to her husband and went fast asleep. Leaving him staring at the ceiling, wondering if letting her do what she did tonight was the right thing to do. Also, wondering if what he had planned in the early part of the following week would serve to offset what she had done. Or, leave some nasty scares on their marriage and possibly some hurts that would not heal.

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The_John_YossarianThe_John_Yossarian5 months ago

There are two ridiculous and laughable premises in this story. First, a security company tied to DC's alphabet soup of agencies would spy on Americans without a warrant is nothing short of... of... no, wait. Scratch that. Let's see... the ridiculous and laughable premise of this story is that the executive leadership of a company would engage in willful, conspiratorial sexual assault of a subordinate employee at significant personal risk. They run the risk of massive civil and felony criminal charges as well as summary divorce, termination of employment, and legal prohibition from ever serving in those types of supervisory positions, again. Stupid. Doubling down on stupid is Debbie's conversation with herself while watching her family clean the backyard. It's a fusion of Sally Fields at the Oscars and the worst internal dialogue you've ever read. Then, there are the silly contractions like 'haveta' and 'shouldta' ---I'm now hearing Fargo dialogue in my head! Also, every Private Investigator doing divorce work cautions their clients thinking about reconciling not to view the photos or videos, because some things cannot be unseen. Real life never mirrors the 4K quality of LW surveillance video, but MC is as unfazed as if he's a cyborg. Also, what kind of guy sits there casually speaking with this "wise Jewish mama" and executive trophy wife while their husbands are raping his wife? Again, that dialogue was laughable. "This time next year, I'm going to be a vice president." Then, his revenge plan is straight out of fantasyland. When Debbie returns from being gangbanged, he wants to DANCE? More comic gold! I looked up, and there are THREE more chapters of this Confounded Horse Puckey (gettin' in the Fargo spirit, here) to read. I think I'll need what Debbie is drinking to make that slog. Seriously, republish this in Satire & Humor, and it's a 5.0 shoe-in, ya, I mean, dontch know, eh?

LonesomeBoy60LonesomeBoy60about 1 year ago

Why would any man in his right mind let his wife do some whore shyt like that? And he just watched all the crap up until then, he is one sorry motherfucker.

PorterrhPorterrhover 1 year ago

These stories are so cliched …. Wife becomes a slut, totally disrespecting her husband and vows… meanwhile husband is like dr Frankenstein in his laboratory maniacally concocting some new magical and ingenious potion of retribution … fucking ridiculous …

bigurnbigurnalmost 2 years ago

All of the wives charging in behind a couple of flash/bangs, just as they all got naked would have been a better arrangement...

schulz777schulz777about 2 years ago

Stupid story about stupid husband

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