"How much are we paying her?" Wendy asked.
"I haven't decided yet. I've already given her two hundred."
"That seems pretty cheap. I wouldn't sell my blowjobs for $100 a pop. Even if they're not as good as hers."
"Don't say that. I love your blowjobs, and because they're yours, they'll always be better than anyone's," I told her, stealing a quick kiss.
"How much would you pay, husband mine?" she teased.
I was still feeling a little pissed. "Let's see, in the last month I got 2 blowjobs. You're not cheap to keep you know. Between half of the household cost, your car, your insurance, shopping, hair-care, mani-pedis, eating out, God, you must run me six grand a month easy. Three grand a blowjob, is what I'm paying. Even without the house, it's gotta be at least $1500. Shit, I had no idea your BJs were so damn costly. Kelly really is a bargain!"
Wendy smacked me, just as Kelly walked back in the room. "Should...should I leave?" the sexy little teen asked tentatively.
I patted the bed beside me. "I need you around for the morning, Angel."
Kelly grinned and hopped on the bed, almost bouncing Wendy off. "You guys are better when you're not fighting." She snuggled up next to me, kissing my cheek. "Do you have any idea how lucky you are, you silly slut?"
"Yes, and could you please put some panties on, you teasing little whore? He's just a man, and I don't want you accidentally ending up impaled in the night. I can't believe he's resisted that tight little teen body. You know that's not fair, right?"
"He'd resist me forever. He doesn't love me. I should be so lucky." Still, she slid off the bed, and slipped her thong back on.
Wendy sighed. "Like that covers anything." She got up and dug into her drawer, pulling out a sealed bag. She tossed it across the room. "Brand new."
Kelly peeled off her thong, opened the bag, and pulled on the plain white panties. "Jesus, I feel like I'm back in middle-school," she griped, adjusting them. "Is this what you wear for him? No wonder he came looking for me."
"Kill the light, Angel? And come to bed," I said.
She hit the wall switch, and I felt her cuddle up to me. I was exhausted, and happier than I should have been, after what my wife had done. I held both women against my body, and tried to sleep. It wasn't long before I felt Kelly's slender body shaking, and felt her tears on my shoulder.
"Shh," I whispered, hugging her close.
"Thank you for tonight," she whispered. "I'd almost forgotten how nice normal is."
Wendy's body was trembling, and I heard her soft sobs, as she tried to stifle them. Jesus, two crying women. That's all I needed.
"It's Ok, baby," I whispered, not even sure myself who I was talking to.
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I hope you enjoyed it so far. I've submitted a few chapters at once, so they should probably come out on subsequent days. As always, your votes and comments are welcome and appreciated.
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Always good
Your stuff is always great. I particularly like Kelly.
I hope you're getting paid for your writing talents somewhere.
Excellent! Nothing Compares!
Thankfully you ended telling us there was more to this story. First I want to commend you on the writing. For those who think there aren't any women as shallow and selfish as Wendy, I beg to differ. Wendy could be the fictitional version of a real life female named Brenda. She believed she could do anything sexual with whomever she desired. As long as she got sexual enjoyment out of it, it was fine and nothing to feel guilty about. But if another woman sought those same sexual enjoyments from Brenda's husband, while Brenda was out with other men, there would be hell to pay. And remember Brenda is a real life person, not a fictitious character. And she didn't stop at oral sex. Nothing was taboo. Men or women. Oral, vaginal, or anal. Sodomy. Gangbangs. Anything goes. She fucked over 50 men in two weeks while her husband was away at summer camp with the National Guard. Including having sex with his three brothers and two of her own. So, ask me if this story sounds like real life? Of course it does. Once again, excellent writing.more...
That was Excellent
That was so bloody well written. You captured the emotion and dialogue perfectly. You wrote the wife's 'just a blowjob' stance as well as could be argued, despite it being an incredibly hard stance to defend (which makes sense since it's wrong, but SOMEONE had to be wrong or there would be no conflict).
Great plot. Great emotions. Great characters. The sex was incidental and that's perfectly okay. Amazing stuff.more...
This story has good and bad points. (Note, I just finished part 3 so this comment applies to all 3 parts, may contain spoilers, blah, blah, blah.)
Kelly is of the best characters I have read in a while. If everyone else in the story went poof and the story only focused on her, I would be good with that.
Wendy, otoh is bad. One dimensional and flat. Ditto the sister. I don't think Wendy has done anything except shop, sex, and cry in 3 chapters (no, the other thing doesn't count, I will deal with that in a moment). It would be nice if she at least had a hobby.
The over all plot is ridiculous. Including the revenge. (Both his of getting Kelly and the revenge later on.) But that is kind of okay. I knew the plot at the title.
And I realize that sounds like a lot of bad, but it really isn't. I love Kelly a lot, I like Mom, and I like the protagonist.more...
No way!!
The wife is a flake. I would have divorced her the next day.Kelly seemed to have more of a level head than the wife. I kick the wife out and have Kelly live with him. Clean her up and get her where she can take care of herself if she wanted.more...
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