- Gay Male
- It Wasn't Me
- Page 3
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"You may want to look away for a minute, bro. I'm about to wash her cervix." Thrust.
"Shoot him!" Maria begged.
Randy's eyes were darting between mine and my finger on the trigger. Thrust. "I'm gonna spunk now," he said. "Get ready, bitch."
"I'll kill you, Randy, so help me God, I will."
He was pushing deep now, hard, and fast. I saw the look in his eyes. He was ready.
"You don't have the stones to pull the trigger, bro." He thrust and held it. His eyes went out of focus, and he held his breath.
In that split second, I saw the knife loosen in his hand. Maria had taught me how to shoot. My wrist was ready for the recoil.
- COMMENTS
MickeyKayalmost 3 years agoI'm with baikalisan...DAMN Indeed!!! Keep up the AMAZINGLY AWESOME writing!!! And Don't be listening to Haters!!! Haters are gonna Hate for MANY reasons but I Have to write this one...because They Aren't nor Can they Ever Be as TALENTED AS YOU!!! DAMN!!! This Was EPIC!!! THANK YOU!!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoI think a lot of effort and, yes, talent went into writing this story. As far as I'm concerned, your friend is full of it if he wants to trash you over writing this. It was tense, hot and very thought provoking right to the very end.
wantsomefun1951over 11 years agoAuthorMy "friend" who commented here, and on a bunch of my other stuff, on October 15, 2012, is apparently not a fan.
It wouldn't surprise me if I knew who he was -- another writer who is nice enough to me when we're both logged-in on the other website where we submit stories, but who stabs his fellow writers in the back when he can. He's one of those guys who takes himself WAY too seriously.
Buddy -- we're writing porn and submitting it without payment to an internet site, using FAKE names. This is a hobby, a way to have fun, to express ourselves, and to entertain, isn't it?
Thanks for the "1" rating. I wish you had actually read the damn thing.
