It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 06

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Mythrana
Mythrana
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"I am a little hungry," Aida admitted smiling a little back at him.

She had returned his smile tentatively and Alex knew everything would be alright now. She had finally come to an understanding within herself and finally accepted the fact of their transaction completely.

To be cont/-

Mythrana
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Editing

I like your story well enough, but I find that the poor grammar and syntax make it difficult to follow some times. I think it would not take a good editor long to improve your story immensely while keeping your thoughts and ideas intact. A good read made better!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Beautiful

I love your work, it has such sensuality and talent in it. I also think that this story is improving with every chapter. thanks

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