Jae: Worst Jedi Ever Pt. 02

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I write stories as long as I feel they need to be, so I don't really have a word count in mind. And it just so happened that this story ended up being 10,046 words.

So, basically, I decided it would be more prudent to let the story conclude in the third installment. It's fucking huge as it is. Of course, whether I conclude in the third chapter assumes that I don't go nuts with that one, too.

Another note. I've never tried to write rap before, so yeah. Magnaculus may have sounded a bit weird.

Anyway, as always, comments, compliments, and constructive criticism are more than welcome. I hope it was fun!

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Written by Sarkopheros

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SarkopherosSarkopherosover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks a lot, anon

I appreciate the comment. And I'm glad it was entertaining even if it was extreme for your taste. When you say it hit the same notes as Brod, what do you mean? (I ask as if Literotica has a way of letting people know when their comments are replied to)

And that's high praise—thanks for saying that. I don't really think about what makes good inflation so much as I just do it. There's plenty more coming where that came from. Should be a new Brod in another few days.

 Anonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome stuff.

I really like your Brod stories, though this comes pretty close to hitting my limits for things I can enjoy... But it definitely hit some of the same notes as Brod, and it's fun. You, more than pretty much any other writer I've seen, seem to understand what makes inflation so good. And you keep demonstrating that. Nice work as always, keep the smut coming, my friend.

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