Jake and Toby Ch. 08

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When I walked in, there was soft music playing and dinner smelled wonderful. Doc walked up, took my bag and kissed me. "Go take a shower, I have laid out some comfortable clothes. Dinner is ready when you come down."

I went upstairs and found a pair of jeans and a t-shirt laying in the bathroom and nothing else. They are my comfortable jeans, and I do like going commando. I chuckled. Once I was finished I dug in my sock drawer for the box and put it in my pocket and went downstairs.

Doc had candles on the table, very little lighting on. I could see salad was already waiting for the both of us but I couldn't see Doc. But I felt him, when he wrapped his arms around me. "Hey Babe, Jake are we in a mood tonight?"

"Yes, a very good mood, why don't we sit down and have our dinner and talk."

Doc took my hand and walked me over to the table, he was in a very romantic mood so I decided to wait on my news. We ate dinner, had a wonderful conversation and then he did something I wasn't expecting, he got down on one knee beside me.

"Toby, theses past two weeks I found out something. I found out that I wouldn't want to live my life without you. That I love you and I hope that you would want to spend the rest of your life, the rest of my life with me. Tobias Benjamin Smith, will you do me the honor and make me a very happy man and marry me?" He pulled out this ring, oh my God this ring was stunning.

He blew me away, I wasn't expecting him to ask me, I started laughing. I didn't mean to and Doc's face fall. "Oh, shit no Doc, Yes, holy, fuck, yes, I want to marry you."

"Then why are you laughing?" He had a confused look on his face.

I pulled the little box out of my pocket. "I guess we were on the same wave length." Doc looked at the box and then up at me. "Doc, I don't want to live my life without you either."

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Richian28Richian28over 2 years ago

I absolutely loved this story, i have read it multiple times, i hope in the near future you will be able to post more chapters about Jake and Toby ❤️👍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

From the comment here, I realize the author had health problems and was/maybe is dealing with much bigger problems so best of luck to him. None of this matters in the scope of all of that. Having said that, it was very disappointing that the story of Jake & Toby ended abruptly and did not get a proper conclusion. The follow-up prequel of Toby & Jack’s story was a hot mess and a huge decline from this story. And the Ch 9 vignette of Toby in Boston before Doc was a waste. I hated reading about Tony being dominated by the random dude Kevin and especially hated that he gave up his anal virginity to this stranger that he never saw again. Unfortunately this chapter (Ch8) was the last one in which a confident smoking hot Toby was present. All the rest was a version of him that I can’t recognize and don’t want to read about. Sorry but it’s true.

kmillerk1kmillerk1over 7 years agoAuthor
I would have hoped that.....

readers would have read my profile page, but some have, most have not. I have been sick for some time. I'm on the mend but still tired and doctors are still trying to help me. I pull out my stories when I feel well, but I will be honest, I sat at work at talked to my coworker the other day and told them I didn't even remember the last 4 months, LOL, probably even longer than that. I just pulled out my chapter 15 of D & L, the last time I worked on it was July 29, 2016, I couldn't even tell you what I even wrote. Can I tell you when any of my stories will be out, all I can tell you is, I WILL TRY. THANK YOU FOR BEING HERE. I do/did enjoy writing, it has just been put on hold. My health is more important. kmillerk1

Casey5940Casey5940almost 8 years ago
Excellent

I liked the writing style! The story is very well told. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The best!

Waiting for the next chapter please! It's not finish I'm right ?

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