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Her father fucked her for what seemed like hours moving from one position to the other. Finally Jamie jumped off of him and got on all fours on the floor.
"Fuck my naughty ass Daddy."
It was as if the father had been programmed, because he jumped right down and shoved his cock right into his little girl's ass and pounded away like a wild man. This would soon end the night's fun as the father began to spue cum all in his little girls ass. He feel onto the floor as she fell to the other side.
Anders stepped over her and whispered in her ear, "I expect you back in the lab tomorrow. I'll turn off the gang bang command then. If I were you I wouldn't go anywhere though... unless you really want to be fucked like a whore. I'm sure your father would like you to stay tonight."
With that Anders left.
Jamie had no idea what was in store for her, but she was really starting to like the way things turned out. It might have something to do with the fact that he hadn't killed of the last command yet, or maybe deep down inside that was the way she really wanted to be. It didn't really matter now, because that was the way she was.
- COMMENTS
denniscleeover 15 years agoHigh school grades! Don't take any job offered so easily. You could get hypnotised into becoming a slut. This could happen to YOU! (you wish)
Despite some grammer mistakes, this is a good hot yarn.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agostarted ok. yes, some grammar and spelling bad. Ending with DAD was SICK. Incest. this is where paedaphiles come from.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI liked it though there were some grammer problems. Probably a rough draft. I like the way the last guy did a typo while trying to talk bad about the grammer on his post lol. qord for word... funny.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThe story has a good approach and gets very hot. That despite the horrible grammar, using wrong qords and wrong tense etc., etc., This should have been a 4+
Get a grammar/spell checker or use the editors to help. Wording was very often so bad it stalled the story completely until I figured out what you were trying to say.
When Jamie reviewed the experiments, I couldn't tell which Jamie was featured - the one on video, or the one reviewing.
Anonymousover 17 years agoI don't know if this is a first time story (if so, it is fairly good - for a first time story). But this really isn't a five by any stretch of what a five should mean. There is minimal character development, stiff dialog, minimal (and predictable) plot, and the sex scenes are ok but repetitious.
It isn't a total loss: there are few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes - but that's not what I read for.
How do you rate the really good stories if you give this one a five???
