This casual attitude about sex was quite newfound, at least for me. They did not realize just how new this was to us, and that we were pretty horrified by our own behavior. But we loved our men, heart and soul.
We knew we would try to please them. We would happily do whatever it took to please them. If more outrageous behavior were to be in our future to keep our men happy, we would do it. More than likely we would even enjoy doing it. The future looked scary, but it also looked happy. Indeed it looked very happy. Oh Happy Day.
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It sure isn't a winning story. I agree with CliterateDyke.
Way too much time spent on the main characters feeling guilty and sinful. Christian moral conundrums mixed with partner swapping and repetitive incest made for a boring, and honestly rather moronic narrative. Lose the apologetic guilt next time and you'd maybe have a decent story. All the moralizing just annoyed the hell out of me and really messed up the story.more...
Winning story
Every guy dreams about great slut.cant beat these two. Really good story and look forward to more about all of them. Good luck on contest.
It was decent
The whole thing at the club was ruined by reality that kept invading my thoughts. I ended up skipping through some to find more interesting details. A story needs background, so I will call it my problem there. The second night should not have been much of a big deal since both sets of twins fucked the night before. The brother/sister sex drew my attention, but the brother was discarded by the sisters quickly. Not much of what I wanted out of the content except a bit of incest.
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Great start weird rushed ending
Great very erotic story that really could of used a few more chapters the ending was very rushed and took away from the story
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