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"Please tell me," I said softly, wiping the start of a tear from the corner of my grumpy bear's eye.
"I was with the Douglas's on Long Island for almost a year and a half; Mark and Susan Douglas. They were wealthy people. I had my own room with its own bathroom. I joined the Cub Scouts. I went to a private school.
I even had my own dog a border collie adopted from the animal shelter. Her name was Patsy and she followed me everywhere and slept on my bed. Patsy was smart and gentle and loving and my best friend.
They encouraged me to call them Mom and Dad and I did. They told me that they loved me and I believed them. The social worker let it slip that my birth mother was a heroin addict when they inquired about my medial history. She wasn't required to disclose that.
To make a long story short a baby came available for adoption and their lawyer assured them it was a done deal.....they kept Patsy for their new baby son.
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoFive stars!
I must say that this is a good one. Character development, engaging to the reader, and plot development are really the first rate.
Look forward to Chapter 2.
marlam5almost 13 years agoA very good story that I enjoyed very much.
Looking forward to part two.
I agree with most of the other commentators; do some editing yourself or find someone to do it for you.
The story deserves it.
Really love your writting.
You're one of my favourit writers.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoA very enjoyable story, but I have to agree with the others that a bit of editiing would be very helpful. Great character development, and I liked your idea of shifting from one point of view to another. Keep that, but work on the structure a bit. By all means keep writing! I will be watching anxiously for chapter two.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI got caught in an interesting detailed story that was built brick by brick.
It was very through and complete. I am looking forward to the next chapter with great interest.
