Jess was a Bitch Ch. 11

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Jess feels as if she's losing her mind. Travis' tongue is lashing her clit. Her orgasm begins to gather power, sending pulses of delight ricocheting through her body. She wants to suck his dick, so she does. She can taste Caitlin's pussy on it. She wants to swivel, eat Caitlin's pussy while her husband does the same to her. She wants to suck Jon. She wants Jon's mouth on her breasts, his cock in her ass, Travis in her pussy, Caitlin's breast in her mouth. Her mind is overloaded. She clutches at Travis' legs as her orgasm leaves her senseless. She's barely aware that she's taken his cock in her mouth or that he fills it with his cum.

Her vision goes soft. She's aware, though it's a hazy awareness, a film not quite in focus, that Caitlin's body is shivering, as Jon holds her tight against his mouth. She looks down. Caitlin holds Jon's cock against her cheek. When he cums it's a sad imitation of the first time. His balls are spent.

Jess begins to giggle. Caitlin joins her after a moment. Even Travis chuckles and Jess watches his softening cock bounce on his belly. Jon catches his breath and reaches for Jess. She rests her face on the back of Caitlin's calf and cups his cheek. Her eyes are bright.

"I love you," he whispers.

"I know, baby. I love you, too," Jess whispers.

"I love you too, goof ball," Caitlin chuckles.

"Which goof ball, me or Jon," Jess asks her, stroking Jon's cheek.

"Both of you," Caitlin laughs. She turns to her husband. "But I love you even more, you beautiful, wonderful man."

The bodies untangle, each ending up in the arms of their most beloved.

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WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

I keep saying it but ignorant authors just keep repeating this bullshit. The authors who know don’t.

Incest does not share, ever. One has to understand an incest relationship, the dynamics of incest, to really understand the intensity of such a relationship.

This chapter scores 1/5/for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

This is a muddled mess. People don't usually go from being conflicted and in tears about the complications of their love life straight into having group sex. It's just weird with all the emotions they have been wrestling with. The group sex is no problem in the story, it is where the group sex takes place in the timeline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

It seemed muddled and not part of the story as it was till now. If anything it spoiled it.

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 6 years ago
A sort of side story.

Somehow this seemed to be a sort of side story written by a different author which, I thought, took away from the main theme. It would stand on it's own alone without needing a tie in to the series. In the beginning, the unexplained tears and feelings of Gloria, the short sentences that explained their intent without elaborating on the action to tell a story of the three couples that had happened over a longer period of time then the paragraph exposed, and then the unexplained and unfinished painting. I found it sufficient without being arousing but diminishing the effects of later events; as I said, a stand alone story but still worthy of 4*. Just my $ .02.

ArmyBikerArmyBikerabout 6 years ago
Losing track

Or used to be a great story about the brother and sister, now it's just turning into sun orgy and not focused on what the story started as. Losing focus for the sake of gratuitous sex

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