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"DO SOMETHING JB!"
Jessamy looked around frantically for a possible escape route. There was none. Stealing the Landrover was out of the question with this many people in the way. As the mob closed in on all sides, she rotated slowly around with a Glock in each hand, "I DONT WANT TO HURT ANYONE SO DON'T COME ANY FUCKING CLOSER!"
But they didn't have to. Jessamy didn't even see who or what hit her in the back of the head. She stumbled forward as white stars of pain exploded behind her eyes. Her Glocks both clattered away as she landed on her hands and knees.
A booted foot kicked her in the ribs, knocking her onto her side.
Through tears of pain, the last blurred image Jessamy registered was the wooden stock of an antique AK47 descending towards her face ...
COMING SOON - CHAPTER SIX: GLOUCESTER
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoSorry, this cliffhanger did not work for me. You've created a character far to savvy to take a assumed diabolical murder into an angry mob, and then expect them to listen to an impassioned speech. It's just far to stupid for her to do. Other than that, its been a great story so far, and you could easily turn it into a TV series if you wished.
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Anonymousabout 2 years agoBrilliant again. Only a couple of small errors - like using 'at' when you meant 'as' during the Threlkeld period, and a few misspellings. Then, with the rest of the story flowing so well, I guess you can be forgiven a couple. Looking forward to the next exciting instalment.
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