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And after all, there really is No Place Like Home
Dedicated to Jen & Ash, 10.10.10
© Jessica Deamer, 2010
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years ago...but one thing spoiled it. When you're writing a conversation between two or more people, split your script into separate paragraphs for each person speaking. On the first page you had one massive paragraph, a long conversation between Jessica and her friend Dawn. It became almost unreadable because: (a) while long paragraphs may be acceptable in books, on a computer screen they are not easy to read; and (b) it eventually became difficult to distinguish who was speaking at any given time.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoEngaging, entertaining, sexy and smart. Real people in real situations. Nice easy writing style with a definite feel for the characters -- where they came from, who they are and why they think like they do.
I looki forward to reading more . . . .
2275jrover 13 years agoawesome story. reading this was like watching it taking place.
it was so very hot and horny love lesbian and bi sexaul women stories.
out standing writing now for the next part or parts of your story
