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Click hereBeing the guys we were, Chad and I rarely showed our love for each other in public. Doing so would have made us and too many other people uncomfortable, especially in the suburban area where we lived. But in private, there was never any doubt that we loved each other intensely. We eventually found a water-front house that we both liked, we modernized both the insides and outsides, and then moved in together. It had taken a while, but we and others finally came to accept who we were and the kind of relationship we had. Through all of this, we came up with our own saying: "We're not always perfect, but we're perfect for each other."
I still get sappy with Chad every now and then, and believe it or not, he does with me, too. As I look back on how far our relationship has come in such short time, I still marvel at it. My guardian angel has found the right person for me, and when I look at him, I do two things. First, I always silently thank him for having the patience to stay with me. Second, I always silently thank her for finding him for me.
The story was awesome and well-written. I’m glad you ended it the way you did! It was a little touch and go for awhile there.
Very long story but it was really well-written and really held my interest. Things I liked - the descriptions of both sexy men and how much they were into each other. All the sex was hot. The fact that they flipped frequently - each giving and taking so passionately. Jim’s care and deep love for Chad was impressive. The passion Chad showed Jim once he “picked” him. Jim teaching Chad to communicate with words and Chad teaching Jim to communicate without words. Things I didn’t like: so much flip-fucking but absolutely no sucking, rimming, eating or swallowing cum - that seems very odd for two guys who love sex and were super into each other’s bodies, cocks, balls, and holes?! Robert telling all the intimate details about him and Jim to Chad and then Chad seemed to be competing to do all that Jim had done with Robert - so weird! I didn’t like that Chad picked his ex-wife (who clearly didn’t care about him or love him) over Jim - and only came back when she picked an old BF over him, hurting him again. In effect, making Jim Chad’s rebound love. Then when she called to say she’d been cheated on, he called her Babe and said he “may not be able to be there for her”! WTF. Kick her to the curb as she clearly doesn’t really live you and only uses you when she’s down. And for a very romantic long love story, the epilogue was pretty fucked up - despite their deep love for each other they include Robert in threeways (they never cheated on their ex-wives so this lack of monogamy seemed odd), Chad asking why Jim never tried to get with Suzanne?! And then he gave permission for Jim to help Suzanne with Robert’s prostate? And Jim outed Robert to Suzanne by telling all their intimate past time her behind Robert’s back (I guess returning the favor from when Robt did the same with Chad). All of these revelations really cheapened what Jim and Chad had and felt dirty, promiscuous, salacious and not permanent - and even mean at times. If it had been a bit less poly - for lack of a better word - I would have really loved this story wholeheartedly.
This a good story, but one thing just doesn't work..How is it that they constantly fuck each other at length, but have never sucked each other off?
Wanted to say that I hate this author but not really true. I usually will not read such long stories. I like to get it up, get off and move on. Unfortunately with this story I could not stop reading. I kept telling myself I wouldn't read another page but I kept reading until I finished. For a story to be fantasy, Gnarledwood has a very vivid, passionate and intense mind. Not sure anyone other than a 16 year old could come as many times as Chad and Jim did on the first weekend but again fantasy. Loved it !
I don't often read such long stories but this is so well written I had to keep going to the end!