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"Is there something else I have not seen?" John ask.
"Well, let me put it this way to you, you cut me a PO for the next 6 months........and I will let you taste the sweetest and tightest ass in the industry.......think about it."
With that said, Christie turns around and walked away, leaving John with a sight of what he could expect in 7 days time............
- COMMENTS
don87654about 16 years agoThis story definitely had some fantasy in it. I've been in Sales for 40 years with a lot of good-looking women to work with, and I've never seen a sales proposal that went like this one.
Imanokabout 17 years agoAuthorHey, thanks for your comment. This is the first time I have written anything in a story form and hope to explore different ways of writing.
When I was writing this story I was really doing it thinking aloud, I mean we don't always talk in proper grammar , do we?
I am also glad that the "guy", I assume, from Denmark like it. I am still working on a couple of stories written in a different form, and yes, I have intention to write with less "........".
Keep the comments coming, good or bad.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI thought it was great, fuck the other reviewers !!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI agree the other comment! This 'junk writing at best'! The story has potential, but needs a complete rewrite. The author needs to use Grammar Check and Spell Check before submitting this story again!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoIt's garbage writing best expample so bad I didn't waste reading past about a half page. There's so much use of .... that the story is lost and confusing. A full complete rewrite is necessary to remove and then proof read/spell check the story before resubmitting it.
