Jori - A Fairy Tale of Sorts Ch. 04

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Watching the two of them in their passionate embrace, oblivious to anything else, Abnoba smiled.

"Remind me to get the recipe for these honey-cakes next time I'm passing through," she commented, before turning and walking out the door.

Finis.

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story - seemed a little unfinished because we're left without knowing if they'll be accepted back into the clan.

PartlyPartly9 months ago

I have to agree this last bit lost a step or two. BUT holy heck, what an imagination. Greatly enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Almost a fantastic story. My only criticism is that toward the end, the storyline lost it's way and faded into oblivion, leaving me with a "so what" feeling. Not sure if it an unfinished series.

Strand

Rainbow88Rainbow88over 6 years ago
My favorite Fairy Tale

I love it all. Thank you so much for sharing. Childhood Fairy Tales were never so stimulating or so romantic. When Jori confronts Abnuba, forgetting she can fry him to a cinder; that's funny. So you have it all and done very nicely.

IslaMoradaIslaMoradaalmost 7 years ago
Nice!

Lovely story, quality writing. Very nice.

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