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"Ask me anything, Lia. Now is the best time to ask. I am holding the bravest, most beautiful girl in the world. The one I thought I would never see again, and who comes to free me at last."
"I ask only that we do not begin this here. I would not refuse you if you ask now, but I want to start my life with you away from this jail of yours."
"Of course," he smiled, "Now that you say it like that, I cannot wait to get away from this cursed place."
She kissed him deeply for many minutes and almost lost her resolve herself about beginning somewhere else. After picking up their weapons and her pack, he took her hand as they walked back to leave the prison that he'd built so long ago.
"I am thinking of what you said about winning the game," she said as they walked, "I think that you won it."
He looked at her and shook his head. "I disagree. Think back a little. You have disarmed me and won my heart -- or, won it back, maybe. So I think that you won the game."
"It is not a clear enough outcome," she said with consideration while she did her best to look determined to resolve it.
"I think it can only be settled on our meadow, "she said. "This is serious, and we will need to chase each other like foxes, I think, each one hunting the other."
He looked down at her mischievous smile. They walked further and she looked off into the distance. "What do you think, Nikki?"
"I think," he said as considered, "that it is not a clear enough outcome."
- COMMENTS
jpz007ahrenover 11 years agoSubtext, its all right between the spaces. My rough draft was much meaner, but it didn't feel right posting that xD This is just mean enough.
All in all, excellent story, plenty of torture for the main Pair, really makes their coming together that much sweeter.
Anonymousover 12 years agoIt hurts that Helen and Ion love each other. Lia and Ion love each other, and are going to be able to continue. They deserve each other, but Helen doesn't deserve abandonment.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis read like the end, but I hope after 11 great chapters we get more than a half page of Ion's potential future happiness and no resolution to Helen getting redemtion or just desserts. A bit more please! Thank you for posting this great story consistently, so few authors show us readers this much consideration.
Yves
Jemgirlover 12 years agoI love the story very much. I am not ready for it to end just yet.
