- Group Sex
- Just Desserts
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"You deserve an early mark." Andrew said as he came up behind me and held me ever so gently, his hands under my bump, and kissing my cheek. He signalled to a couple of the staff who gathered up all the presents and helped us carry them down to our car. This was the signal for another round of kissing and congratulations as we left the office. I guess that I've gotten my just desserts.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story line was way too inconsistant to be acceptable or enjoyable. Not a good effort at all. anon jerry
Anonymousover 16 years agoIt started out fine, but then it roller coaster all over the place. Did you write this at one time? It read like you stopped, then came back to it but with a different plot. Then you stopped again and came back with yet another idea.
Anonymousover 16 years agojust very flat. no dynamism. she sounds like she's got no soul/life to her.
plus, why would she sleep with them when they weren't that good anyway?? and why would that be part of the plan?
sort of has 2 stories going on at once, would've been better to write them separately or work on the reasoning behind her moves better.
all that distracted me so much I couldn't concentrate on the sex!
