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Click here"Fine," I grumbled, figuring that I'd have to wait ten minutes tops before he drifted off. But he didn't. Every few minutes his body would go stiff as he gave a big full bodied yawn, then he would poke me in the side to make sure I was still awake. It was just starting to get light out when we both finally drifted off to sleep.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI've read this so many times and they have so much passion, it never gets old. Also, I still just wanna know what Vince said in the last voicemail >.<
TimothyMover 10 years agoWell that was predictable - them falling in love I mean. But the twisty-turny road that took them there was created by a master. It was both plausible and intense. This story is still fabulous, and I feel even more sorry for Vince, and worried about the possible heartbreak for both of them.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI love Vince and Jack and their relationship and banter is quite believable and the chemistry was built up nicely. Hope they have a chance to build smth solid before life outside school interrupts since Vince has a fiancee and a whole lot of pple counting on him back home. As for Jack, he seems to know what he's getting into but hope he doesn't settle for being ''the other woman'' because he deserves so much more. Love this story and can't wait for you to update!! :)
