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The initiation ritual was complete.
- COMMENTS
GrrrreatImaginationabout 12 years agoThanks for putting the prayers in English. They were beautiful. As you indicated in the intro, this is a piece between earlier and later pieces. It seemed too short. Even more troubling to me is that I don't know which story comes next (or came previously). Do keep writing. You've got some skills showing in this story.
mBrowabout 13 years agoThe story appeared to be technically and grammatically well done, but the narrative left me confused. It does not seem suited for a quick read, as I felt I needed to start writing notes to keep up with characters and relationships. But it does seem you are setting up for later installments delivering answers and more erotic encounters. Good luck!
