Kidnapped

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She is startled, on a walk, and taken to a cabin for sex.
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Once upon a summer time, it was a beautiful warm day. The sun was out, and the sky was clear. It was about 70 degrees farenheit, (21.1 celsius) with a light breeze. There is a house near some woods, where a lady, named Nancy lives.

Nancy walks outside on this warm day, wearing a long black dress, with the zipper under her left arm. The shirt part of her dress feels like velvet. It is solid black, with long sleeves. Her skirt is of a rougher, black, material. There are many tiny flowers scattered on the skirt. She also has white socks, and sneakers, on.

Nancy uses a cane for balance over grass. She walks down the front steps, and to the curb. She turns left and walks to a near by park.

Unknown to her, a man watchs her as she walks. He follows her close by loving how sweet she looks.

Nancy has good hearing, but is busy humming to herself.

Without her knowing, he closes the gap on her.

Nancy thinks she hears something. She moves her short legs faster.

Being taller, he catches up to her, cutting her off.

Nancy is startled, as she is stopped by a tall man, she has not seen before.

Nancy looks at this stranger.

Nancy "Do I know you?"

The stranger says nothing but grabs her and pulls her into the woods with him.

Nancy struggles, trying to pull away.

He easily pushs her to the ground.

Nancy says "Ugh!" She falls.

The stranger speaks. "Now listen! If you do as I tell you, I will not hurt you."

"What do you want?" Nancy says, scared.

He says "First I want your body then I want to train you as mine."

Nancy tries to crawl away.

He pulls her back.

Nancy sighs.

The stranger shows her a knife "Do as I tell you! Understand?"

Nancy looks at the knife, and stops moving.

He straddles over her.

Nancy looks up at him.

He plays with her right breast

Nancy folds her arms, still trying to be tough.

The stranger back hands her.

"Ouch." Nancy says.

The stranger rubs her right breast more.

Nancy pleads, "Please don't."

The stranger "shut up and do as I tell you. Or I will hurt you!"

Nancy gets quiet.

The stranger says, "Now, open your top for me."

Nancy reluctantly reaches her right hand under her left arm, and unzips her dress.

The stranger says"All the way now."

Nancy bends her left arm, reaches her right arm over, and grabs the sleeve. Then she holds on to her sleeve, as she bends her left arm down, pulling it out of her sleeve. Then, pushing up with her left arm, she takes her dress off, over her head, and drops it.

The stranger runs the knife over her shoulders and chest.

Nancy does not look happy.

The stranger kisss her neck.

Nancy slightly smiles.

The stranger whispers, "Open your bra."

Nancy says, "I don't want to."

The stranger bites into her shoulder softly and whispers, "Do it!"

Nancy: "But......"

The stranger: "but what?"

Nancy: "I don't want to."

The stranger places the knife in her ribs. "But do it!"

Nancy feels the knife blade in her ribs. She slips her arms out of her bra. and removes it.

The stranger kisss the right nipple and circles it with his tongue.

Nancy says " I like that."

The stranger circles it as he kisses it. Then he softly sucks it.

Nancy: "mmmmmmmmmmmm"

Nancy senses that she is loosing her desire to resist.

The stranger suckles on it slowly and softly as he drops the knife and plays with her other nipple.

Nancy: "mmmmmmmmmmm."

The stranger sucks the nipple harder now.

Nancy says "I like how that feels."

The stranger keeps sucking on the right nipple and plays with the left one.

Nancy moans: "ohhh."

The stranger kisss down her belly.

Nancy smiles big.

The stranger licks her belly

Nancy: "Why me?"

The stranger says, "Because I have followed you and want to make you mine. and to train you."

Nancy looks suprised. "I've been followed?"

The stranger "By me."

Nancy says, "Sometimes, I thought I was seen."

The stranger kisss her navel and kisss lower so he has picked her as his.

Nancy gathers courage, and slowly moves a hand to the knife.

The stranger kissses and licks her not noticing her hand.

Nancy grabs the knife, and slowly moves her hands to her sides.

Nancy says, "This feels wonderful!"

The stranger licks her navel right above her pussy and begins kissing down on it.

Nancy moves the hand with the knife, to push him away from her pussy, holding the knife tight.

The stranger looks at her.

Nancy asks, "Something wrong?"

The stranger sees her with the knife.

The stranger grabs her hand with the knife. "That is not a smart thing to do."

Nancy says, "I know."

Nancy opens her hand.

The stranger says, Drop it and it will be fine."

Nancy does not drop it.

The stranger looks her in the eyes.

The look frightens her.

Nancy drops it.

The stranger kisss her hard and pulls her to him.

Nancy: "mmmmmmmmm."

The stranger says, "I am going to make you mine now, and take you right now."

Nancy askes, "How?"

The stranger kisss her. "I am going to fuck you," he whispers.

The stranger spreads her legs open as she is on the ground.

Nancy relaxes.

The stranger grips her ankles and raises them in the air.

Nancy: "oh!"

The stranger looks her in the eyes as He places his cock head against her pussy opening.

Nancy moans, "mmmmmmmmmm."

The stranger: "Are you ready?" I moan.

Nancy: "yes."

The stranger says, "Do it now."

Nancy moans, "mmmmmmmmmm."

The stranger: "hands over your head."

Nancy moves her hands.

The stranger pushes in her all the way.

Nancy "ouch. Tight fit."

The stranger moans as he pushes in and out slowly, feeling how tight she is.

Nancy "ugh."

Nancy "How does this make me yours?"

The stranger kisss her. "I am going to cumn in you and it makes you mine."

Nancy "oh."

The stranger kisss her more and pushs in more.

Nancy grunts.

The stranger raises her legs in the air more.

The stranger begins to thrust in her harder.

Nancy "Please don't hurt me."

The stranger: "You want to get on top then?"

Nancy nods

The stranger: "okay."

The stranger gets up off her and lays on his back.

Nancy smiles, and moves over, gets on top, and pushes her pussy against his cock.

The stranger grabs her hips, slowly pulling her down onto him.

Nancy groans as she feels the stranger's cock enter her deep. "Ugh."

The stranger feels how tight she is. He eases up, a little, on his pulling.

Nancy feels the pressure ease, and smiles.

The stranger asks: "Is that better?"

Nancy says: "Yes."

The stranger smiles, looking at her happy face, as he presses his cock all the way in.

He asks her: "How does that feel?"

Nancy says: "mmmmmmmmmm good."

He says "Good. There is something I need you to do for me."

"Yes?"

As he releases his seed into her pussy: "Call me Sir, from now on."

Nancy gasps, suprised. "Yes Sir." Nancy feels the warm liquid inside her.

The stranger says: "Good girl."

He says, "Stand up!"

Nancy, knowing what the warm feeling means, stands up. She stands relaxed, accepting her situation.

The end.

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  • COMMENTS
5 Comments
USMC03USMC03about 16 years ago
I liked it!

I thought it was wonderful. The writing shows only a glimpse of what talent I think you have. I thought it was a cool comment of some of these reluctance stories, but I might be wrong. Maybe it was more about someone needing love and looking in all the wrong places! Either way, it was very refreshing. Please write more.

EbonyFire77EbonyFire77over 16 years ago
Sorry but...

I thought you had a good storyline going on, but it doesn't seem like that girl was being *that* reluctant. She sorta gave up after he told her what to do and touched her. Also, the format the story was written in made it even less appealing, as there were no paragraphs, no transitions, no detail flow, etc. I think a rewrite of this story, making it more realistic of course, would do better justice. I know this sounds harsh, but it's much more constructive than what others have had to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Gods, this sucks.

Reading this story made me limp. It's about as sexy as watching a dog dump.

toolman501toolman501over 17 years ago
perfect analogy *dick and jane

Its very rare i comment on someones actual writing ability. Typically i concentrate on the story and details and overlook the writers ability (grammer, flow, etc). This story however read like *jane gets dick. Not sure if it was intentional or not though? If so then it was a good story if not... Perhaps you want to read some other stories on here or the BDSM library and get some pointers.

bdsmbillbdsmbillover 17 years ago
Fun with dick and Jane

This unusual story, written in present tense, reads like a grade school reading book. I can't decide if it was a deliberate parody or not.

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