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A word came to her mind.
Shift…
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Purplefizzover 1 year agoStill littered with typos/incorrect words, please authors - if you read this, don’t use MS spellcheck, it doesn’t identify a correctly spelt word in the wrong place, loose/lose, bow/blow etc etc, please use a reliable, competent beta reader and editor.
On a positive note, most of the horrible formatting issues from Chapter1 seem to be gone.
Aurimazalmost 8 years agoNobody told you yet so I'll tell...
Challenge between Wolfgang and Grey-Honk - reasons for that is beyond dumb. Even among humans, when a woman tells you she's already taken, it means exactly that - she don't want you near her. So, even if you challenge somebody for her, it's already useless. And even worse - Wolfgang agree to take a challenge, instead killing that dumbass Grey on the spot. That situation really compromises the order inside or between packs, no matter their laws. In short - this one situation is logically impossible. And since you already wrote all story, I really hope not to read something like that in future...
dairetoover 10 years agoPlease check which one is correct.
Lose - when you dont have something you did
Loose - when something is not tight.
It disrupts the storyline when having to correct the words as you are reading
