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He broke the kiss and looked into her eyes. "Shut up for a minute, okay?" He was smiling, his eyes soft. She nodded, and he moved his lips back to hers.
She heard Brandon's voice from the hallway. "Does this mean you're not mad at Will anymore?" And she heard Will's chuckle through their kiss.
- COMMENTS
dirtyoldbimanover 1 year agoreally beginning to like your main characters although it took 5 chapters to get there. Only one is still a "jerk" is Tim the Cop.
MarkT63almost 4 years agoA cheating whore and an ex prostitute are doing very well. Glad the artist is with a good woman!!!
Anonymousover 4 years agoYour stories are so well written and your characters so real I feel like im living the story.Please share more of them with us.Your fan PCJ
Anonymousover 5 years agoI am enjoying the story except for the David and Cynthia relationship. It seems that David is content being a lesser partner. In my opinion successful marriages and relationships are based on equal partnerships. Sure there is give and take, cyclical experiences when one person carries more of the load temporarily, but in this relationship David seems to give most of the time and Cynthia takes and takes.
She screwed up. She had a ongoing affair and contrary to later chapters did it because she didn't love her husband. Instead of dealing with it by talking, counseling, or any number of methods, she decided the best way was to hurt in in the most despicable way a person can hurt their spouse. And then David basically begs her to come back. And then she throws in conditions to them getting back together.
At this point I feel that David should have learned his lesson but hasn't. He is walking into disaster with eyes wide open and I don't feel sorry for him any longer.
