Kyle and Will Ch. 06

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My mind was tripping over itself trying to figure out what to respond to first. Will loved me. It's not like I didn't know it. I loved him. We loved each other. Suddenly I didn't feel the need to fight him or hurt him. I needed him. He filled up the space inside me and apart we didn't work. I kissed the soft spot under his ear, and nestled my head on his shoulder.

"I didn't pity you Will. My heart was breaking for you because I knew how important baseball was to you. I worried about you everyday. I didn't know how to help you. I'm sorry too, I would never want to push you away. I love you."

"I did so much stuff wrong Kyle, I needed you I should have talked to you, let you in." Will lamented.

"We." I said.

"We what?" Will asked confused.

"We did so much stuff wrong. We should have talked to each other. We've been together so long and we know each other. There are bound to be times when we fight. We should have trusted what we had." I framed his face and pulled him close for a long smoldering kiss.

"Wait Kyle." Will sounded nervous. "You should know that before your parent's accident, I was planning on coming home."

"What do you mean?"

"Well, I got that clarity I was seeking and since I won't be able to play baseball, I decided to give sports medicine a try and I registered at York two weeks ago." He watched me from beneath hooded eyes. "I was planning on begging you to let me come home when this happened."

I smiled broadly at him. "I would have let you beg too, but for taking so long to come to your senses you do have to help me box up and decide what to do with this house."

'So we're good?"

"We'll get better. I love you Will." I said kissing him then sucking on his neck. Hearing his long moan I continued to tease his lips and bite at his nipples through his shirt.

"Soooo," I drawled, "You feel good?" Will nodded. "Aand any seizures?" I rolled up his shirt to kiss his chest.

"Not one. The uhh, therapy and meds seems to help." He bit his lip in response to my teasing. "If you keep that up I can't promise to answer any more questions."

I allowed my lips to hover over the waistband of his pants. "Just one more for now." I said and dipped my tongue into his belly button.

"What?" he hissed.

"How is your dick?"

'Touch it and find out."

I reached down and ran my hand down the length of Will's still hardening cock. We made short work of our clothes, clawing and kissing at each other. I wanted to take it slow to make up for before and show Will how much I loved him, but I couldn't. The horse was out the gate and Will's need matched mine in the desire to possess each other.

I entered him gently this time, wrapping his legs around me and slid in deep. It was such a relief to feel like I was coming home.

"Fuck Will, I missed this, I've missed us like this."

"Me too Kyle, now make love to me."

I pushed into Will, moving in and out slowly and seamlessly. Each thrust met with intense friction that threatened to take us over the edge. I reached down and stroked Will's dick, jerking him while I eased in and out of him.

"Come for me baby, I want to see you come." I whispered.

Will's response was to lift his hips seating me deeper into him. The soft sounds of his enjoyment filled my ears. I felt when he was about to cum. His whole body tightened up and he squeezed down on my dick. A couple of good jerks had Will shooting a stream of cream over his stomach and down my hand. I brought my hand up to my mouth, sucking his juices off my fingers, wrapping it around my tongue, savoring its taste. Tasting Will's cum brought me closer to orgasm, the pressure of his walls closing in on my dick was all it took. I bore down with one last push before filling him with my seed.

"I love you" Will whispered into my ear.

"I love you." I whispered back.

We fell back on to the floor smiling, lost in a haze of lust, leaving the past few months behind, glad to have things back to how they should be.

FIN

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Didn’t live up to potential

This story started off great but by the final two chapters it sputtered out leaving lots of unrealized potential. After his injury, the exit of Will to NY made no sense. Kyle and Will were soulmates that suffered through literally years of obstacles to be together. Kyle was clearly caring and concerned for Will’s injury but Will treated him like shit. There is no way that a committed lover/basically husband at this point would let Kyle think there was something sexual with Neil and then move to another state with him, never explaining anything. They had lived together for years and he just ups and moves - acting like it’s just temporary. No one bails like that with not even a breakup conversation. Then upon return, he waltz up at the cemetery?! Sure he said he was planning to return anyway, but why then didn’t he call Kyle to express his sympathies, or in the days leading up to the funeral to make sure he was ok. To show up after the burial and act like nothing was wrong is ludicrous and inhumanly cruel. His words of explanation to Kyle rang hollow and insincere. Will seemed surprised that Kyle was hurt, that he assumed Neil was fucking Will, or that their entire life-long relationship was on the brink of collapse. Basically the main character of this story was painted as a selfish, heartless, illogical bastard. There was no reason for that part of the story - will’s recovery causing distance and irrational moods would have been enough to introduce some barriers for the couple. But the extremes to which it was written all seemed unrealistic and insulting. Made the ending seem kind of juvenile and too sweetly wrapped up given the depth of the wrongs inflicted here. Sad because the early chapters were so good and had loads of potential.

MickeyKayMickeyKayalmost 4 years ago
Tears But Happy Ones

Thank you! ThankYou! THANK YOU!!! I was So Happy with this story it is one of the more realistic stories I’ve read here!! I mean this is one of those based on actual events! I Love Love fiction but I’m a sucker for True Stories! If this is your life story Awesome if it’s fictional it’s awesome too! I HATE cheating and when in the last chapter he moved to NY With Neil my heart Dropped! And I thought Oh No!! I stopped reading stories when the writer added at the end the partner had cheated with someone close to them for a month and even downed him for being “simple” I left off reading anymore stories after leaving him a comment that said it wasn’t necessary and I wasn’t the only one to say it! So Bravo and Thank you Again for restoring my faith in the relationship!!! You’re FANTASTIC and if anyone says different let it roll off your back and You Do You!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This series was awesome

Good Job!

MysTreeMysTreeover 7 years ago
Don't quit your day job yet

This is honest constructive criticism, if you really are trying to get better, this needs to be addressed.

* The story is tedious to read.

* Choppy sequences and dry dialogue that continuously slips into 3rd person. (btw, who is this narrator?)

* I don't really feel for these characters, you lack the ability to emotionally invest the reader in their lives.

* Even the hook up descriptions are boring, like Mr. Rogers trying to read porn to a lethargic audience.

* The whole thing is rushed from one situation to the next, as though you became bored with it and just wanted a passable conclusion. Is this a first draft?

* Please, read your story aloud before you post as it will help you to hear what it is lacking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
i like this

i liked the resolvement at the end, yes it felt tushed in the previous chapter, but I thinkit came down to you moving the story four years ahead. working on the time forward device will help your writing,a heading like four years later would have been acceptable, so we know we're no longer reading about high schools, that's my suggestion txs

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