The wedding took place six weeks later, and the honeymoon was at the cabin. My boss called me a cheap skate for not taking his daughter on a proper honeymoon. But he knew that we both fought so hard between us to get the cabin just right, and everyday we are there it will always be our honeymoon. Lacey and I have one strict rule that we always keep. The weekends belong to us and no mention of work ever crosses the door of the cabin. It may have started out being Lacey's dream place. However I guess when she started this project she never thought she would end up with a husband to keep her company there as well.
So much editing is still needed!!!!
"Your" vs. "You're", " there" vs. "their", garbled sentences, nouns and pronouns that don't agree ... A LOT of editing is still needed.
great story
5*, but you really need to learn how to use a comma. you also need to use the correct spelling of a word. site not sight. soar not sore. don't rely on spell and grammar check. yeah i know i'm missing caps, but it's a pain with my keypad! still liked the story though!more...
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