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Click hereMary lost track of time with the head pressed firm between petrified legs, imagining fingers, tongues, feet and just about anything; and they were all Josie's. Not until her sheets were bunched on the floor, spotty with dampness, did she turn it off. She would save herself for Josie, Mary decided with surprising austere resolution. No more wand and no more orgasms alone, that's the dedication she would show, only to unleash on her hungry wolf. Mary was a little lamb, fattening up and storing herself away, then tossing herself at her predator, into certain doom and abandon. She imagined their next encounter, maybe in a hotel with a backpack filled with toys or outside, next to a slow brook with reeds at its bank. The throbbing rose once more in defiance, impelling her to wander lower. Okay, just one more and that's it...
But Josie would not call her for another week.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years ago... but I really wanted a whole lot more of a sexual reward for the characters. The only way I can think of is to go into a lot more detail on the sexual experience, the passion, Mary's feelings on being taken with force, and both of them reveling in their pleasure and the fulfillment of their needs. Condensing their sex down from a very memorable couple of hours to just one paragraph is kind of a let-down. It's erotica - show us the sex matters to the characters, so it can matter to us, by getting us all turned on like they are.
germanchocolate4uover 5 years agoFor some reason the nursery rhythm Mary Had A Little Lamb comes to mind. Ha! But in this case the wolf was dommed and eaten literally (her pussy was). Cute. Made me smile
germanchocolate4uover 8 years agoExcellent!! I went back to read chapter 1 before reading your recently posted chapter 2 and I'm glad I did. It's given me insight into the main character(s) and why the story's called Lamb and Wolf. Ooh, now on to part 2, I can't wait.
Anonymousover 8 years agoTo be sure, it wasn't a long romance detailing the ups and downs of a relationship (unfortunately), but it was a fun story showing Mary's character.
It would be great if it were expanded into a longer story, developing her relationship with Josie, solving the mystery of the cars, and perhaps populating the apartment across the street. But I enjoyed her unique and well defined character.
Manziover 8 years agoAuthorCriticism or praise, I'm always happy to read anything that could make me better at what I do. Even a comment like "boring..." has some value. What makes it boring? Was the pacing bad, was the prose not erotic enough or maybe it just wasn't a story that fit your interest? I try to avoid explicit words and terms to allow the reader to imagine it but I'm far from perfect. I'm working on it. ;)
