With that she blew Daniel a kiss, and turned out the light.
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With that she blew Daniel a kiss, and turned out the light.
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Good story. A followup chapter about the weekend would be good.
Excellent! Accidentaly fucking your mom? Doesn't get any hotter! 2 thumbs up!
d+ effort
There were only two characters so why the use of repeating the names? Don't you know what a pronoun is? The story was good but the plot was weak. A boy comes home and sees his mom naked then in an act of complete disrespect he disobeys her and she acting just as immature as he engages in a wrestling match? And the first reaction to an accident... unbelievable penetration is arousal? Well maybe most readers are as novice as the writers and won't notice bad writing.more...
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need to know how the shopping went??? Who had any energy Sunday evening??
nice read
wonderful story
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