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With that he brought the window up and the driver sped off without another word.
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From_One_to_Anotherabout 10 years agoAuthorChapter 4 has been submitted as of 5 minutes ago! Thank you @Phil_Patsfan for your comments it has helped a lot with writing:)
Everyone enjoy and let me know! Thanks!!
From_One_to_Anotherover 10 years agoAuthorWell let's just say not for a while. Super duper busy with a bunch of stuff and kinda having a hard time finding words (shocking because I never shut up) but I pinky swear as soon as I figure out an approximate time I will let you know!!:)
Phil_Patsfanover 10 years agoI've been reading "TRS" as well! And a few others ("The Reluctant Journey", "Telos", The "Finding Home" series, to name a few) . When will your next chapter be out?
From_One_to_Anotherover 10 years agoAuthorAll in good time my dear! Oh please don't worry about it I adore being asked questions! It actually helps in the whole writing process. I am obsessed with the last tritan!! (And the rebellious slave by hispet21) So I know the feeling.
In this story it is set in the future after a divide in the country so it's a part of its own separate "world". I do plan on explaining further in chapter 4 about their laws and the contract so I can tell you no more! If I do I'd have to kill you and where's the fun in that? Torturing you with unfinished stories is much more fulfilling! Thank you so much for reading and commenting and all that jazz. Oh and happy new year!
Phil_Patsfanover 10 years agoBut your answers have just generated more questions. I assume that in the reality you have created in your story, slavery, or the ownership of one person by another is legal. Given that is the case, why would her father allow this to happen to his daughter? I certainly would not. What kind of deal does a man make that allows his own flesh and blood to be sold into slavery? Why wasn't Ella warned of the possibility of this happening so that she could be prepared for it. She will be going from "rich girl" to sex slave because of someone else's actions and misdeeds (her father's and Evan's). This seems rather unfair to her (I suppose that's why it's posted as a nonconsent/reluctance story). I know I have asked a lot of questions but his is what I do when I get interested in a story (ask Waterburn ("The Last Tritan") -- we have had many such "conversations" about her story!). Anyway, I am enjoying your story, I think it's well written and intriguing, and I plan to continue reading it. I do hope the resolution is a happy ending for Ella, I think she deserves it (I'm not sure about her father). Please keep writing! no one likes an unfinished story.
