Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
"Happy...oh fuck", she paused gathering breath, then continuing, "birthday to you...happy birth, ah...day to you."
She could hear herself singing, along with the others, though the sound of Sandra's song more muffled for obvious reasons as she sang the same tune with a mouthful of his cock.
"Happy birthday...dear Richard, happy birthday...to you!"
"Again!" he told them laughing. "And keep singing it until I come!" he told them all.
As bizarre as it was, Deedee kept singing, kept repeating the song over and over as Richard's tongue devoured her pussy, licking it...flicking the delicate nubbin of her clit until she was once again hovering on the edge of insanity. Even the voices of the others had become nothing more than a distant blur as her own impending climax descended upon her, the telltale signs of orgasm already seizing her thoughts, the silly song more a bumble of tune than of words.
"Hap...py, baaa irth day to you!"
The sound of Richard's sudden climatic groan informed her, along with everyone else that he was in the throes of climax, which instantaneously triggered her own. Deedee felt the sudden rush of additional fluids as they pulsed from her cunt in a spasmodic display of orgasmic delight. The last word of the song still echoing from her lips, repeating itself over and over again as she came. "You...you...you! Oh fuck, Richard! You!" She cried out pleasurably as his lips continued their sweet sucking torture of her preciously aroused clit.
Still in the last sweet shivers of ecstasy, Deedee felt the firm yet gentle press of his hands as he indicated to her to move away from him. Which she did. "Give her my cream," he told Sandra. "Kiss her...then give it to Marsha next," he told Deedee. Obediently, she did so, running her tongue within and about the woman's mouth, licking from her the remnants of his creamy nectar, greedily wishing to swallow it, not daring as she in turn then placed her lips upon Marsha's as she in turn licked from her the essence of his creamy seed.
They swapped his cum gingerly back and forth from one another, over and over again until there was nothing left, until they were doing nothing more than kissing, tasting nothing more than what was the last vestiges of his now consumed spunk.
"Time for us to go and meet the rest of our guests," he informed them all minutes later. Naked, he followed behind them instructing them where to go. Deedee smiled inwardly the touch of his hand lightly caressing the still reddened area of her ass as she walked before him, wondering as she did what the rest of the evening held in store for her, uncaring, willing more than anything to do nothing more than please him as she led the rest of the way.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI completely agree with 'Strange'. This is a completely confusing, disconnected, and depressing narrative. Chapter 01 was filled with her attraction to him, her participation at the party, passing the test by pleasuring several men, The sensual bathing and the favor Richard showed her in the 'Chamber'. This installment just looked like he had Made Use of Deedee and her compliance with him and attraction to him to get her to bring to his party an obviously more attractive and just as compliant as well as besotted coworker. Just as 'Strange' stated, he is not a true Master as he has no idea about how to see to those who choose to serve him. He is not even a decent human being. You have written a main character who is unfortunate enough to fall for a power drunk ass who seems to enjoy humiliating and abusing women. This was not rape, it was consentual so I won't give it a 'one star'. I give it a two because I really do not like anything about it. This is called litEROTICA for a reason and there is nothing - repeat nothing - erotic about this chapter 02.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoFirst chapter had potential. Her blind acceptance of everything, especially when it involves co-workers, was a stretch for me. The character development was thin, but it had possibilities.
This chapter crashed. Nothing erotic here. He's an ass, not a dom. The situation was uncomfortable and not in any sexy way. I could only wonder why she went along with it all. The action was too much a listing of directions, like bad community theater rehearsals. Do this ! Do that! Now do that other! And curtain.
Anonymousover 8 years agoAs well done as the first chapter is, this one is rather flat. He shows her favor, and then ignores her. He tells her to consider his birthday present, but doesn't let her know he expects another woman. He asks if she has a present for him, and then promptly shows that he wants Sandra. He does not indicate that Sandra should be informed as to what will go on, but punishes her for not doing so. After all, when she attended the first party at New Year's she had no clue what she was in for. He humiliates her in front of a patently more beautiful woman, and treated her as DeeDee's equal though she is a new visitor. There is no excitement here, it even starts off depressing with Deedee being ignored. Then it proceeds to confusion and an ending that dribbles off into only more questions with no indications as to where this is going. Is she part of an 'inner circle' now, part of an accepted group of preferred and talented women? Or is she just there to be used and abused? Will Deedee simply be cast aside in favor of his new 'present' or is Sandra just there for Dr. Edward's birthday pleasure? There is nothing here even vaguely erotic. I'll give this a three because I like your other work, but I'll have to also give this a 'Thumbs Down' for content on it's own. You have the process of being admitted into 'the life' done well. You clearly have no idea what a Master is or how a Sub is to be treated or how to live the life.
Anonymousover 8 years agoLiked the story not exactly sure why. Will have to read it again. It's a little confusing as I'm not sure what Deedee is? A sub, confused, abused!!??
Anonymousover 8 years agoDon't know how I feel about this. Does she come to know herself as a submissive or just for Richard? Where is this story going, it just seems to peter out.
