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"Please, master, get me out of here. Please take me home," she begged. It would be necessary to spend the night in the spare room, away from Jim. Could she ever bring herself to tell him what she had done? It was bad enough being aware of it herself.
Richard took a hold of her arm, guiding her to a back door. She was relieved not to go anywhere near the bar. Getting into his car, she was a little disappointed it was all over. She had never ever experienced such intense feelings before and would probably never again. She had been this mans sex slave, and revelled in the feeling of being used in such a humble role. Of course it couldn't last, it simply couldn't. It was just a game. Just a nasty game they had played in the club.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWere there commas in the story?
With stories this good who really notices,,,,.?
Commas or no commas I am a fan of your writings.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoVery nice story ...I wonder what's happening next to the very submissive Lee Ann...
Can't wait for the next chapter !
Keep on the good work :-)
StoryTeller07almost 12 years agoAuthorThanks for the comment. I seem to be over-reacting to an editor advising me to use more commas. I had a lot of run on sentences. Perhaps British sentences are longer than US ones? I don't mean prisons either! I'm not doing bad for someone who had their education abruptly stopped at 15. I went to about ten different schools before that which was a bad disruption. I'm just lucky it was in Australia, as they have a high standard of education without the harsh discipline of South Africa. In the UK it seems to be a mess that teachers cope with admirably. Thanks again for the comment as it is always appreciated. I have learn't a lot from Litorotica readers.
