"Suck it all off and show me how obedient you are!" Her voice was so relaxed but as always never left any doubt of her authority. This power play gave her a huge turn on. While I was licking up every last drop from her feet, I felt how shivers of arousal went through her whole body.
Half talking, half moaning she pet my head. "Good boy, goooood boy. You will make a very, very, very, very good and obedient boyfriend..."
--- Since I am not a native English speaker I would be grateful for feedback on the content as well as on grammar, use of vocabulary and spelling. Thank you
There is already a more sexual focused 2nd part. I just want to wait for the feedback on Part 1 till I publish 2 ---
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