Lemon to Lemonade Ch. 02

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It turns out that while Michelle was fertile, there was something wrong and she couldn't bear her own children. She says with a slight grin that belies the vanity flowing from her, that there had to be something wrong with her, she just couldn't be that perfect. I smile and shake my head. "Bitch!" Sarah donated the use her uterus and services as surrogate mother to have Michelle's eggs fertilised by James, implanted, and bringing their twins, again one boy and one girl into the world. Everyone thought it was a loving thing to do and Sarah is the favoured aunt with all our children. It has also brought Sarah, Michelle and James closer as a family in their own right.

With Trace and her brood, that makes camping holidays rather fun with thirteen of us. Sixteen when mum, dad and Sarah decide to join us, playing, laughing and generally enjoying each other's company as good friends and family do. I have no idea what has become of the others, and nor do I care.

I know it may sound selfish. However, I really don't care. I have now got what I really wanted all along, the perfect husband and family, with a good selection of loyal friends.

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I really do hope you enjoyed this final chapter and walked away with something to feel good about. To all my friends and family, thank you for being there for me. I truly appreciate it.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

"James is a little on the stupid side you know!"

===> Michael is working with woefully incomplete information. I have no problem with Kelly finally maturing into an adult. And it is clear that she paid for her sins and she loves Michael. Fine. But after her diatribe to Carol, her plot to have him seduced by Michelle and Sarah, her recidivist cheating, ganbangs and her unholy attitude of suppressing James, why would James, and by extension Michelle (and Sarah) have any reason to associate with Kelly whatsoever. Fine if James wants to forgive her at some later date for his own closure, that is his call. But it doesn't mean forgetting. Kelly was a twisted abomination of a wife for some 7-8 months. She was literally out of control, yet somehow not mentally ill. If James wants to soften the truth to Michael to let Kelly move on with another guy, so be it. James has his own happiness now. But Michael's comment is nothing short of either ignorant or ludicrous. If he knew the full truth and listened yo her call to Carol, he woukd be shaken to his core. Just because Kelly grew up and will no longer do that to her man, that is still some warped, sick sh$t she pulled on James, repeatedly, with no guilt and full of malice.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It was good to see Kelly grow up and mature. But given what she did in the first 3 chapters, nit sure why James woukd have much interaction with her. Her conversation with Carol was brutal. Her plot to put him into a trap by hiring out for Michelle and Sara (unknowingly as to their identities) to get leverage to contoj James. Her blatant deceit and disrespect. Not to mention her persistent cheating, and gangbangs with her "friends", those are really quite execrable. Sure James has moved on and is happy with Michelle / Sarah, but his scars will run deep with Kelly. I can understand forgiveness to get over his own pain and get closure and also just basic human decency to a deconstructed and remorseful Kelly, but all the rest near the end seemed a but much. Then again I am fine she grew up, sought to learn from her disaster with James, realizing she didn't really like him and she found someone else in Michael who will benefit from her growth.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice to read a story that understands that redemption doesn’t equal reconciliation. There’s no way she could ever have her first husband back. However, if she’s truly learned her lessons, she can live right with a new husband.

ZK

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I enjoyed the final two chapters much more than the first three, seeing Kelly fighting to improve herself was great.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill698 months ago

Best chapter in agreat story.

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