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Click hereOnce again l climbed aboard a 747 for the journey back to England. Was I looking forward to it? Yes and No. I was hoping I was going to be able to find my oldest daughter and maybe if I was lucky I was going to be reunited with her mother. But it had been a long time and of course Erica could well be happily married.
On the other hand there was going to be a showdown with Margaret and Robert. I no longer considered Robert my brother and neither did any of my family in New Zealand.
End of part three
Would've brought in the Erica character in the first chapter. Waiting until Ch. 3 to trot her out makes it feel like author couldn't figure out a way to end the David-Margaret-Robert triangle.
A lot of fictional characters were needlessly bothered to conjure up this tale. Sure, they are fictional, but have some respect, and don't just needlessly disrupt their lives to involve them in a tale for no apparent purpose but to disrupt their peace and quiet.
Pathetic garbage. Author is constantly looking for the way to rationalize wimping while pretending to be tough. All his male characters are wimps and somehow many times the story end up in violence.
The author also has a penchant to change his characters depending what turn his story has at the moment.
This is truly a piece of garbage writing.
So far both brothers are deplorable. Robert for fucking his sister-in-law, and the husband strikes me as a really stupid self-absorbed asshole who runs away instead of facing life. Your wife committed adultery. Get that sorted out and continue your life.
It gets deeper and deeper. I certainly hope that there are severe consequences for Robert. He is a total ass.