So I'll end my story there. I sure hope you liked it and I'm sorry it's so long.
I left a lot out and have a lot more to tell. I would like to thank my on-line friend Jerry for all his help in getting me into this frame of mind that I'm in now.
I sure never knew that just writing a story could turn my world around like it has.
Oh yes, if Danny my Husband (who I love very much) happens to read this story, I made this all up!!!!!!
And Jerry, I'm very horny right now.......
THE END
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I have only read the first couple of paragraphs and you are going to meet Ben dressed like a slut. I am already hard.
You write a very nice story - fast paced and light-hearted. However, some of your grammar and word choice could be better (i.e. you need to do some editing). If you should decide to write more and need some help with the proof-reading, I would be glad to help. Keep up the good work. Dougmore...
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