"It is considered damaging to Cáel's prestige to be public beaten by his 'First'," Daphne clarified.
"There is no 'First' position in the house structure," Katrina noted.
"It's not my fault. I haven't gotten the 'Resurrecting a Dead House' guide yet," I retreated. "Daphne we should be going. Buffy, keep looking promiscuous...and our House's chosen form of punishment shall be defenestration."
As Daphne and I fled, I heard Buffy say something behind me.
"What's defenestration?"
"Throwing your victim through a closed window, preferable from a fatal height," Katrina informed her.
"Cool," Buffy mused then we were gone.
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I haven't commented on this series until now...
Just couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. This chapter is phenomenal - I never saw the twists and turns coming. Some fabulous one-liners as well. Fascinating and addictive series. He needs to stop wearing rubbers and start knocking up his harem.more...
blindfolded on a rollercoaster...
...(try it sometime. uhhmm,before lunch!) F_S you keep pulling rabid anthropogenic rabbits out of your hat to to surprise your devolved fans.
P.S. 'defenestration', loving it! I gotta work it into one of my stories as a way to get rid of an inconvenient character.more...
5 Stars (Boring, I know!)
Okay I really think HBO needs to get in touch with you for a mini-series offer and give up on that boring and sexless, "Game Of Thrones." (Yes, George R.R. Martin, poor joke. I am huge fan)
Your blend your altered history and language with a very interesting and annoying lead character lets this story breath. The sex is good and the action is as action should be, the result of the conditions of the story, not the reason for the story.
I am also waiting for more chapters after missing the last three parts. I did read them all and salute you again. May your characters and the situation of your stories never be sane.
Thank you very muchmore...
OMG amazing!
I've been reading this story for a long time now, always waiting for more, this is becoming really funny now :) Its extremely entertaining and i honestly can't wait for more, seriously FinalStand, u should just become an actual author and get published but continue using adult content in your stories. They are just so creative!.. and just.. really awesome, its hard to describe something when its so good because when u try to think of it u just end up thinking about parts of it and laughing again.. But seriously now, this has got to be the best story i have read in about half a year, keep up the amazing work! Also im sure if u did start to write stories in an actual book you would get published for sure!more...
How do you do what you do?
I swear, I don't think I've been this entertained by a story as much as this one does. I agree with a previous commentor, I'd definitely watch this if it were an anime or movie (very well done movie). Of course, reading your story is like watching a movie in my head. Love, love, love, love it. Going to be super sad when it ends. Thank you, FinalStand.more...
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