This morning, they confronted me with their defiance. I took some pictures and sent them to a colleague..." I was saying.
"Who? Give me their name," Jormo got in my face.
"I can't recall. It is probably filed away with every other crime you've bought and paid for that Brennan has committed," I was only a few centimeters away.
"Give me the..."
"Shut up and listen," I moved in, suddenly cluing the old guy into me being several inches taller and broader in the chest. "You don't get a name. I didn't break the law - you and your son did. I am hoping that pain and blood is answered with pain and blood - a balancing of the scales of justice.
You don't want that and now you don't want to face the fact that his latest stunt has gotten way beyond what you want to pay," I insisted.
"You won't get away with it," Jormo glowered. "This is my family. This is personal to me."
"Personal...personal, Mr. Sulkanen? No; personal is not you and me," I clarified.
"Personal is your other two sons, a baby daughter, three step-children and a young wife," I laid it out. "You come after me, the parties concerned will go after them - and you. Not on my orders, though. They will act upon a different social agenda which you know nothing of. In the end, you will save no one and fill a few more graves."
"I won't back down," Jormo flared.
"Fine. I don't care," I turned to leave.
"Wait, Cáel, how bad will this personal vendetta get?" Hana pleaded.
"Not sure. I would imagine two generations around - grandparents, aunts, uncles, nieces and nephews, sons, daughters, sons and daughter-in-laws, children and grandchildren," I mused.
"Father," Hana pleaded. It was Deoxyribonucleic acid test time. "Cael, I saw something last night my father needs to see. Please take off your shirt."
"What will that prove, Hana?" Jormo rumbled.
"Look at the man's body. See his scars. Father, Cáel isn't kidding. You and I both know he's not bluffing. This is some Old World madness that...that Brennan has stepped into and...I want to know if you are going to bring down this family because of him," Hana made her stand as my shirt came off.
"All those scars and bruises," the Sulkanen patriarch muttered. "How?"
"I'm a rather disreputable and dishonest man, Mr. Sulkanen. I would rather treat life like a sexually-explicit romantic comedy instead of confront the darkness that is all too fucking common. Turning my back is easy...but that is not how my father raised me. He never told me to be a crusader of any stripe. He did tell me to live with my decisions. I have recently come to realize that includes me being unwilling to bear the burden of refusing to stop wickedness I could have prevented. No fear, Mr. Sulkanen and no regrets. Flesh heals - memories are eternal."
"Father," Hana stood silhouetted by the flames flickering in the fireplace. "What is this man's price? What threat can you make to deter him that he most likely has already faced and defied? I believe him. I believe he has sent events in motion and are now beyond his control. Mr. Keys and the others are dead because of what Brennan and Anima conspired to do and the blood-letting will go on longer than we can afford."
"Run, you fucking slut-coward!" Brennan screamed at her. He was now standing, and very scared. "You've never been a part of this family."
"Father, if you give your life for Brennan, I will understand. I would be heartbroken, but understand," Hana picked up her appeal. "If you sacrifice everyone else for him - that I do not understand.
I can't follow you in that course of action - not and be the woman you have raised me to be. You taught me to protect my family and this is not what you are doing. You are throwing the rest of us away for something that is ENTIRELY Brennan's fault," she said.
"Shut up, Bitch!" Brennan howled.
"Father, if you proceed down this road, then we must part ways. You will have my resignation on your desk Monday morning and I will begin the legal proceedings to return your surname - one of my most treasured gifts, Father," she concluded.
"Cow," Brennan hissed.
For some, blood is thicker than water. In this case it was a matter of the child you have versus the child you wished you had. Even the way Hana stood by the fireplace was a close mimicry of the Old Man. At some point early in her development, Jormo had given Hana guidance and direction. She had repaid that with daughterly devotion.
The guy's first marriage had been a disaster - strong hints of an affair then a fatal car wreck. During the second marriage he had formed an emotional anchor with Hana. As the marriage unraveled, they had become mutually supportive. There was nothing sexual. It was something stronger - shared trust. When the second marriage failed, Hana had stayed behind. She got along well with wife number three because that was what made Jormo happy, and that mattered to Hana.
Brennan was the opposite. He took everything for granted and repaid every gift with mockery and hostility. He was 'owed' this lifestyle. He was anointed at birth to be a person of privilege and the lesser folk best beware. Except now, someone was handing his dad the bill for Brennan's misdeeds and Dad was balking.
"Brennan, be off the grounds by noon tomorrow," Jormo painfully dropped each syllable. "Your trust fund is intact. Stay away for a few months. I will let you know when I have made suitable arrangements."
"Dad...what the fuck?" Brennan was confused.
"Your mother, half-sister and I could have been on that flight as well, Brennan," Jormo's eyes drilled into his son. "Stay away from the rest of the family. You can use any family property, but be gone within 24 hours of any of our arrivals."
"Fuck you, Dad! This was a freak accident," Brennan tried to rally.
"Then this will be a lesson for you in building and keeping an itinerary," his father retorted.
"Bullshit. This is Hana's doing, Dad. She wants your money and wants to shut the rest of us out," Brennan kept attacking. Even I could tell that was the wrong move at this juncture.
"Brennan, Hana gets it all. I re-wrote my will after your youngest sister, Karvala, was born," Jormo glared at his boy.
"Hana gets all the assets. The rest get some level of addition to their Trust Funds, but Hana gets the company. This was decided a year ago. Hana and I didn't tell you because we both hoped you would turn your life around. That hasn't happened. Now, you've revealed yourself as a selfish spoiled child, willing to risk your own family in your wrong-doing.
Do you know what the only thing worse than being called a beast in your own home is? It is acting like a beast. A Man treats each guest like family. A beast ignores the cries of those guests for justice. Damn it, Brennan. I saw what you and your carrion-feeders did to that girl," he was starting to redden with rage.
"Dad, who the..."
"Shut up!" Jormo was now trembling and livid. "You violated her trust in the safety of my house, you violated your responsibilities as a host and lastly, you violated my word as host that she'd BE safe here. And you laughed about it, Brennan - you and your friends laughed about it.
If I was more the man I wish I was, I'd throw you off the damn cliff. If I was more of a father, I would have the police here by now to arrest you. I'm not. I'm giving you a chance to run away. You can make your own arrangements, or Hana can make them for you - your choice," he suggested.
"What if I don't run, Pops?" Brennan sneered at his father.
"Then everything comes out Monday morning. I'll be in trouble, you'll be in serious trouble and you will also be a colossal disappointment, guilty as sin, and broke - as I will freeze all your assets," Jormo stated matter-of-factly.
"You'll go down for this," Brennan threatened.
"This time, Brennan, it is a matter of family. I have sons, daughters and a wife to protect. Hana will take care of the corporation while I'm otherwise occupied," Dad said.
"She'll steal everything," Brennan pointed at Hana.
"There is nothing to steal, Son," the old man shook his head.
"It is hers. Unlike all my other offspring, she's earned it. She's learned the company starting at the ground floor, so she knows what she's doing. No one else has shown the slightest interest. Best of all, I know I can rely on Hana to look after the rest of you once I'm gone. She's never been jealous of any of you, though the reverse isn't true.
We are done here," Jormo sighed. "Brennan, you can go. Mr. Nyilas, you too." I left at a crisp pace. I wasn't running away. I was hurrying back to Casper, to comfort her, and to the rest to give them the news. An hour later, we were all on the road.
Please Rate This Submission:
- 1
- 2
- 3
- 4
- 5
Pandabear11, DaddyLongDick01 and 37 other people favorited this story!
- Recent
Comments - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
Thank you all plus a bit more
Though chapters 22 & 23 are a diversion from the main Havenstone story line, I still feel they were important for the elements they introduce and embellish. Not only do we meet Hana, which becomes huge (and I'm doing more with Estere in Chapter 48, I swear) it also harkens back to the theme of Cáel being unprepared for what fate seems to being tossing at him.
For the guy introduced in Chapter 1 to be 'okay' with being the mystically-chosen leader of a bunch of dedicated man-killers and burying his murdered Father didn't work for me. I am in awe with the psychological process which people go through in the various military training programs across the globe. Whatever derivation of the term for Drill Instructor your Service uses, those people have to hammer normal folks into people capable of making life and death decisions in a split seconds because hesitation could equate to lives lost, or needlessly taken.
Also, if you were in a 'class' with Cáel, could you imagine your DI choosing Cáel for anything approaching a leadership position? Sure, he's affable, but he's not the kind of man he screams out as being 'responsible'. At the start, he wasn't. No, Trent and Felix were your 'hard charger' leadership types.
Instead, in a manner of a few weeks, Cáel finds himself plunging the Amazon Host into a Global War in which he knows innocent lives will be lost ~ because it is a WAR. He knows it is going to be bad ... and he is absolutely, terribly wrong about how bad it will be even though all the clues to how horrific things will become are there (in Chapter 18).
Now, tack on the fact of who is working with and holds a leadership position in - the Amazon Host. It is more than a razor-sharp military organization. It is a militant body filled with people casually capable of killing others - which is NOT the norm for the World's militaries. They kill helpless infants and the elderly. They expect their own elderly to commit ritual suicide. Torture and studied cruelty is the norm for the Amazons yet he cares for them. Worse, he feels this occult obligation to them as a People ~ this inescapable lodestone of his fate.
So, lacking any preparation for his leadership role, knowledge of the larger mystic and secret underworld, and the realization his actions have led to his only parent killed, Cáel cracked. I found that choice totally realistic. He ran away. He would have ran away to Brooke's apartment if that was where the ladies were heading. It wasn't where they were planning to go. Instead he ends up going to a place where he is needed instead of a place where he can unwind.
The lesson is Cáel can't run away from being Ishara ... and it isn't a lesson he absorbs this time around. It comes up again ~ because this was not the life he wanted, or was prepared for and while he does rather well, the mental stress he goes through was pretty intense (from my perspective) ... and all in 84 days.
James aka FinalStandmore...
To aaror
Great translation.
To Finalstand : I don't see why some folks are taking issue with this chapter. I liked it the first time and I was looking for it this time around. Because, now that I know the results, I was able to really enjoy the phone call to Buffy and Càel's enlightenment of Libra concerning Trent.more...
Well Said, Aaror!
Excellent translation of whiny spoiled brat, a language I'm pleased to admit I've never been forced to learn. I enjoy LaaNH more each time I return. Selfishly, I hope FS never ends Cael's story, just continues adding more chapters.more...
Translating the latest anonymous comment...
For those who don't speak whiny spoiled brat:
"so dumb!!!
so many words, so much boringness for so a LAME conclusion! hated it. *"
Means "I write on this site and don't get 1/1000th of the readers as Finalstand. I wish some of the folks reading his story for the 6th time would give one of my stories a try, but as much as my stories suck, I know none of them would even finish a chapter, so all I can do is randomly insult these chapters in hopes of at least bringing him down since I won't get any readers of my own..."
Hope this helps everyone understand the below comment.more...
A Response to superfeluously_e
[From the above comment:]
[Sadly, I'm confused by this chapter. The fact that it took that look for this chapter to come to a decision about the punishment for Brennan's action befuddles me. Right up to the point where Casper walked in in the morning and was high and raped.]
* Please remember, until Casper walks into the Dining Room for breakfast, Cáel has a ton of pain on his plate. Look over his life in the past eight days. He was nearly relocated then made to confront the Legacy of Vranus which tore away any and all lingering doubts about the atrocities the Amazons committed and still commit ~ people he likes. He discovers his O’Shea lineage then his Father is murdered. He feels ghosts looking over his shoulder. He starts a war. He learns his Mother, who he has mourned for 15 years, might still be alive. That is a shitload on his plate already so the LAST thing he wants to do is confront Anima and Brennan.
Cáel only wants to pour all his focus into lusting after a woman’s body ~ something pure and uncluttered to him. That is why he is in the pool earlier in the morning instead of looking after Casper … because Cáel is in pain too. He doesn’t want to be Cáel Ishara. He doesn’t want his last memory of his Burnham home seeing its walls riddled with bullet holes. He wants his entire world to be touching Brooke just right so when she moans and smiles at him, it is better than the Sun rising and louder than the waves crashing on the beach.
Then comes breakfast …*
[I could understand Cáel taking the pictures, but everything that followed made no sense. I mean I initially expected the assassin to kill Brennan as soon as she figured out what happened, or maybe Cáel would.]
* Estere is not there to murder Brennan and his cohorts. Randomly killing people is frowned upon in her profession, despite the bluffs she plays. Cáel simply isn’t a cold-blooded murderer. He knows in the beat-down process, when they begged him to stop, he’d stop … and then they’d put him in jail, or try to. Nothing would have been accomplished. He simply isn’t as ruthless as he feels the situation demands and unlike every other time when this might have come up, he knows a person who is.
I wanted to show Cáel with that dilemma ~ having the power to command ‘death by proxy’. He knows he alone can’t stop Brennan and his crowd. Forgiveness is in his nature. At some point he is afraid he’ll snap and forgive people his heart tells him are beyond redemption. If Cáel lets them off the hook, he knows they will do something this horrible to another person again. He faces the quandary of having the power to effect events and knowing if he doesn’t, evil will be committed again.*
[But I also could believe that Cáel would turn it over to the authorities. I mean he has the pictures, videos, DNA proof right there.]
* Does he? Cáel has his personal experiences to fall back on. You can bet whatever drugs Casper imbibed and alcohol she drank will be laid solely in her lap. She’s an adult and this isn’t a college campus. An expert defense team would point out ‘everyone’ was partying and having sex. Casper, as an adult, got so drunk she did things she regretted in the morning. Under New York law, it is only rape if Casper became inebriated ‘without her consent’, not solely that she was drunk. There will be no evidence she was drugged against her will and everyone she ‘partied’ with will testify to her consumption. After all, Casper WILLING went to Brennan’s for the weekend with ‘friends’. She WILLINGLY went to a Gentleman’s Club earlier that evening. She was partying with people she in earlier evidence (texts and conversations) identified as ‘friends’. Did ALL her friends conspire to rape her? Estere won’t testify ~ she avoids the limelight. Havenstone would most likely ask Cáel to not testify ~ Casper is not an Amazon and they don’t need Sulkanen detectives snooping around. Jormo would ask Hana to not testify. That would leave Brooke and Libra telling about what they witnessed after the fact. All the criminal defense team needs is one juror.
A civil suit means little to Brennan and Company and the few hundred thousand shuffled Casper’s parents way would do nothing to deal with the trauma she endured.
Strangely, what I haven’t mentioned in the story is Hana and Brooke are helping out with Casper’s expenses in therapy. Casper lives with Brooke and Hana sees to her medical needs ~ no lawsuit required.*
[The fact that Anima threatened to post it on a porn website makes the criminal and civil case soooooo much better. Casper may not have been über rich before, but after that lawsuit she certainly would have.]
* Anima would have it posted, but use some bought-and-paid-for flunky to do the work to do so anonymously. Anima is pretty clever and Cáel has the feeling she’s done things like this before. Casper’s legal team can throw all the accusations they want. All Brennan and company have to do is suggest at least one of their accounts was hacked. They’ll pull out a few ‘experts’ to show how ‘easy’ it is and confuse a jury.*
[This was the first chapter where what you have come to expect, or hoped, to happen, didn't. It was also the most unbelievable chapter because of how people acted in it.]
* Sorry about that. I try to steal as much of my stories from events in real life as I can. Different social sets tend to be more forgiving of their members who ‘tragically misbehave’ with members of perceived ‘lesser’ social groups. I do see Brennan’s clique as an extreme example of the abuse of wealth and privilege. Outlandish – yes. Impossible – I don’t think so.
Estere is there to get close physically and mentally with Cáel, not murder anyone. She uses violence to impress Cáel because she divines that to be what he needs at the moment ~ a physically dangerous companion. It is not how she normally acts. Raining down vengeance on Brennan and his crowd is not ‘her thing’. Killing them in a place with massive surveillance and plenty of witnesses … not very professional.
I hoped I wrote Brooke and Libra rather well in this chapter. The fact was Brennan and Company thought those two would give them a ‘pass’ on their behavior because of their shared social class. Sure, they would have been repulsed, but oppose them? Those two women turned out to be cut from a very different cloth.
Hana is trapped by family politics. Her personal sense of Right & Wrong is subordinate to supporting her Father. She does her best to get Jormo to see Brennan’s flaws. In the final showdown, she goes so far to put it all on the line … not for moral reasons, but because Jormo is failing to protect the family which is the prime virtue he has imbued in her.
Jormo is trapped in an escalating cycle of covering up Brennan’s indiscretions. The story witnesses the final act of a long line of Brennan’s fuck-ups. It started small – getting a misdemeanor off his permanent record, or expunging a prep school Honor Code violation. There were punishments and rewards. Therapy and rehab. Brennan promising to do better … until the next time. In my Mind’s Eye, Jormo’s was the journey of Best Intentions gone awry coupled with his unwillingness to accept he was making a mistake in his dealings with Brennan. Brennan was never grateful for his 2nd, 3rd and 4th chances and Jormo sensed it. He simply wouldn’t allow himself to accept his youngest son had become moral degenerate. Only when Hana threw down the gauntlet was Jormo forced to confront reality.
Anima … I write from experience. I have known a woman of that moral caliber.*
[I mean why didn't Cáel and the girls leave after the father came home …]
* They didn’t leave because they could not legally take charge of Casper. There was the fear they would be charged with kidnapping. They couldn’t leave Casper, so they stayed. After the plane crash, Cáel and the gang figured Jormo was too distracted with the threat to Brennan’s life so they felt it was then time to exit with Casper in their company. *
[… and the father acted indifferent to the actions of his son.]
* There is a bit about childhood and parenting in this chapter. Mostly you see Brennan, his failure to appreciate the benefits of his upbringing and the equal failings of Jormo to hold Brennan accountable. In contrast, you have Hana. Jormo raised BOTH children yet they turned out entirely differently. As the story progresses, you get hints that Jormo isn’t a bad father. He made mistakes with Brennan and it cost them both dearly. Jormo mourns for his son.
This chapter is more important because it introduces Hana Sulkanen who become far more important as the story progresses. She is the virtual polar opposite of Brennan and, I repeat, they were both raised by Jormo. Brennan took the love and attention and became a selfish, spoiled brat. Hana took the same and became a Princess.
This chapter is also an eye-opener, I hope, for how the readers look at Libra and Brooke and how they have transformed over the past 15 chapters ~ and how Cáel has evolved his perception of them.*
[There were just too many times in the chapter where I wondered "why are they still in that house" and "why isn't Brennan dead?" Just my opinion. It's still a 5-star story so far and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for posting!!]
* Still in the house ~ Casper. Brennan dead ~ he is as good as dead once Cáel makes that phone call. Thank you for the stars. I do appreciate it. Hopefully you will keep reading. In ‘Life as a New Hire Ch. 44 – Extra’ I go back over the events with Casper, but from the perspective of Felix being there with and without Cáel. While certainly a good number of people end up dead because of the malfeasance in this chapter, important people are introduced, or brought more into the story.
You can’t imagine Brooke and Libra will ever look at Cáel the same way again and vice versa. The repercussions of the phone call with Javiera are coming up. Then there is Hana … she’s going places as far as this tale goes.*more...
Show more comments or
Read All 36 User Comments or
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!