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"Wow," I said softly as I held up my hand. "Ladies, please give me a second. From the moment I discovered your secret, I never thought I'd live this long. Let me treasure this impossible moment." And they did.
- COMMENTS
mole1142 months agoMy god that was a tough read felt like was in a history class I’d prefer more Cael less blah blah but your story and can’t deny it’s definitely well written just maybe shorter world history would make it better after all it is cael and the intern survive story isn’t it lol
Anonymousover 1 year agoAnd just because I'm a bit of a 'grammar Nazi', the phrase is... "Lest we forget..." not "Less we forget..." .
Just sayen'... :)
Anonymousover 1 year agoJust a correction. Arunachal Pradesh has always been under India's control. It makes no sense India would give up claims to Aksai Chin for Arunachal which it already controls. Moreover India has the third largest Armed forces behind US and China and it would play a larger role in reality than portrayed in the story. India is the only country that can stand upto China in that region. I feel you ought to research more in the geopolitics and power dynamics of the region.
Dai_Stihoover 3 years agoI know this story is done, but I had to comment. I've loved the humor and I disagree with the commenters referencing John Ringo. I'd compare these last few chapters to later David Weber: 80% Briefing, 10% New Character Intro, 10% Main Plot Progression.
That being said, I still love where the story is going and it is extremely well written. I have to admit that I am speed-reading/ skimming through a lot of the "Briefing" parts and miss the earlier style, but I'm still hooked. I want to see where this goes to the end!
Thank you for a great story and 5 stars all the way through.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI'm sad that someone misunderstood my point. The TL;DR version: Ringo's stuff isn't any better than this, until late in the writing/editing process, and he has tons of professional editorial support!
Admittedly, it *was* the Great Wall of Text... It's a hobby I've taken up while waiting for more good chapters :)
To put it a different way: FinalStand's LANH manages to be pretty comparable to the works of a New York Times bestseller author, without any of the support and help that such a successful author receives almost automatically.
I think that, with similar editorial help, LANH would definitely not do worse than, say, the Paladin of Shadows series. Saying this is not a diss on John Ringo's skills, nor on FinalStand's skills. Rather, I'm imagining a world in which LANH was available in hardcover after being polished by a bestseller-grade editorial team, hopefully with dozens of sequels... it's a world in which I'd be *flat* broke, instead of just broke!
