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Life is really good to me, but I don't know why. I guess Jeanne and Dana will tell me when I need to know.
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rbloch665 months agoIt’s a really great story, and I love the happy ending (no pun intended.) At first, I had a huge issue with the deceit, but when all was revealed, I realized that none of it was malicious. In fact, the plans she made to sink Dana’s hubby was brilliant. I don’t know how else one might go about achieving the results that they wanted, but her plan seemed to work ok. 5/5
Rancher46about 2 years agoWhat a great imagination this author has, personally I love the way he told the story. This fictional tale was great from start to finish. Well done 5++stars
Anonymousabout 6 years agoMore or less what Pappy7 said. Your writing is generally way above average for this site. Probably not enough explicit, drawn-out sexual description for a lot of people, but that's fine. I just mostly don't find the stories worth more reading. Sorry. 1*
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI think i would have reacted differently.
They had a deal, if you want to try someone new thats ok, just come home afterward and tell. Cool.
The trouble is, he didnt want to try some one new.
Add to that, she lied!! Atleast twice. Once when she said she had a week long meeting and again when she said sha was starting her period the night before he left in the RV.
And she sure as hell manipulated him into impregnating two different women. What if he didnt want kids with other women? What if he didnt want to live in a threeway marriage? What if the neighbor moved away and took the kid and he NEVER his his daughter again?
The story worked out but i dpnt really know many people who enjoy being manipulated, even if the bait is a sexy loving woman. Better to COMMUNICATE rather than manipulate.
Of course the story would have been much shorter and less entertaining that way, probably.
Imagine if the husband had backed out on a week of vacation at the last minute, and set up a couple of his cpllege buddies to sleep with his wife. I doubt many women would have said "ok, great, how do you want me."
I may be wrong, but "just saying".
