Light and Dark Eternal Ch. 04

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I need you echoed through her mind so clearly she could've sworn it was said to her right then and there, and not in a dream. I need you!

"Darby?"

Pulled back from the brink, the square popped into focus. She knew that voice, and rose to her feet, slipping the carving into her bag. Turning around she was confronted by an image of her mother and almost started crying. She'd prepared herself, after all she knew what Victoria Blake looked like, but seeing her in the flesh was something else entirely. She looked much younger than her eighty-six years, closer to sixty-six, which just made the similarities stand out more. Her snow white hair was pulled into a braid and her bright piercing blue eyes were glassy, her emotions painted across her face. Even the lines around her eyes and tilt of her head reminded Darby of her mother.

Victoria smiled and pulled her into her arms. Instantly everything calmed. The presence retreated until it was a barely felt whisper, her mind cleared, and the whirlpool drained away. She was at peace. She was home.

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LucindaPaigeLucindaPaigealmost 5 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much! I love these characters. There are a couple that haven't been introduced yet, and I can't wait for readers to meet them. I'm working on the next chapter as I write this, and hopefully I'll get it posted within the week.

MelanPoncaMelanPoncaalmost 5 years ago
Great set up!

I'm impressed by your work thus far. I'm also pretty invested in your characters and would very much like to see how you develop them. Please continue your story arc; you've got good stuff here!

Mel

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