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A moment later, I cried out, "Wait a sec!" but then I was gasping. Okay, maybe screaming. Or beginning to cry and pant against the pain as though doing Lamaze.
I simply couldn't believe Bobby was still pushing the goddamn thing up my ass. "Oh, mother fucker!" I groaned. My fingers closed convulsively on his arm, but he didn't even notice. Afire with unsatisfied lust, he was wiggling the monster, jamming it up bit by bit, into my bowels. It felt like an un-greased baseball bat. Then, everyone was clapping. I looked down, dazed. Yes, from between my trembling thighs was squirting a thick golden stream. "Oh, yes!"
I was pissing myself out.
And that completes my confession.
- COMMENTS
EllenMelvilleabout 6 years agoAuthorMy most interesting commentator, by far. I agree this story is not among my best. Literotica rejected it twice and I removed more and more material. Or perhaps the conception is rather conventional. I will check on the writing issue that you mentioned. Thanks for the comment and the stars!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI found your opening paragraphs concerning the ‘us and them’ mentality that still seems rife in the LGBT community interesting. I’ve noted that it’s not enough to simply agree with, and vote for, equality issues. Unless one is actively campaigning one is still treated as the enemy, or at the least as an outsider. Other minority groups eg. racial seem to take a similar stance. I’ve a sneaking suspicion it actually impedes what they are trying to achieve. End of social comment.
Regarding the story itself, I don’t have a lot to say. Good (four star), which is the least I expect from you, but not great. Possibly didn’t have a uniqueness aspect that I need to see before allocating the fifth star, though the various sexual connotations were cleverly combined. I don’t often comment on technical writing issues, but there seemed to be a major continuity error concerning handcuffs at Para. 31. I’ll leave that to you to check.
