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I wonder if letting him see my tits would be an appropriate tip? My luck he'd faint dead away and we'd have to call an EMT to revive him.
"Add two 10 pound bags of ice, I'll grab them and dump them in the cooler. Oh and Tom, buddy, can you help her carry the bags out to the truck? Just put this stuff on a tab, we're going to stop back this evening and pick up some steaks, I'll settle up with Max then."
Tom followed Linda to the truck carrying two bags of groceries. Linda's shirt blew open in the breeze, but because Tom was behind her, he couldn't see her exposed body. Tom didn't miss that her shirt was now completely open and he was imagining what he was missing. He cursed his luck for not walking in front of her.
Randy was standing at the passenger door waiting for the two. Linda stopped in front of him and quickly caught the front of her shirt and closed it just as Tom walked in front of her casting a quick glance, missing everything again. He damned his luck.
Randy opened the passenger door and turned to Linda. "Linda, honey, my shirt please." He reached out for her to hand it to him.
Linda's mouth dropped open, "What? No, Rand, you can't be serious. Here? Now? Not in front of this young man. You said I could wear this while we were shopping."
"Well, we're done shopping; you don't need it any longer. We're not in the store. Come on give it to me."
"Oh dear God, Rand!" Linda looked at Tom and he looked like a deer caught in headlights. He just stood in place holding the bags of groceries. "I'm so sorry Tom; Randy is just being an ass."
Linda gave Randy a look to kill and whispered, "You really are an ass-hole!" She then slid the shirt off her shoulders and handed it to him. She stood in the parking lot, beside the truck, in front of young Tom, and except for her tennis shoes, completely and totally naked.
"Thank you." Randy said and threw the shirt on the back seat. "Here, I'll take the bags now." He put them on the floor behind the front seat. "Can you give Linda a hand getting in the truck, Tom? It's a big step up."
Tom helped Linda get in the truck as she slid first one leg and then the other; she realized that the young man was looking directly at her open pussy. Linda suddenly felt a rush of sexual excitement and she purposely opened her legs to give young Tom a good long look at her exposed womanhood. When her legs finally closed, Tom looked up to Linda's face and she smiled and whispered, "Thank you, its okay to look, I don't mind."
Tom gave an embarrassed smile, shook his head once up and down and turned and stumbled back to the store.
As Randy laughed and drove out of the parking lot, Linda snarled, "You are going to pay for that mister, I guarantee you will suffer for that."
"What? You just made a young man's day! Hell, you just made his whole life."
The ride to Terry's took another 20 minutes. Several times Randy looked over at the lovely naked woman sitting beside him and he would chuckle. If Linda responded at all it was to give him the middle finger and respond, "Fucker!"
This only made him laugh louder and made Linda more angry.
- COMMENTS
Sailman66over 6 years agoAfter reading all the other comments I am seriously doubting the anonymous commenters. They act like they are the giants of the literary world for people who are amateur authors having a go at something. Never will I comment anonymously on a story. That said, again loved this part as with all the others. 5
Randy56ralmost 8 years agoLoved this short story, very eurotic and can't wait to read more.
HGriffinalmost 8 years agoAuthorAgain I'm sorry you didn't like the style of this particular chapter. I was just trying something new, apparently it failed. Its unfortunate that you found it unreadable.
The next installment will be submitted in the next few days and usually takes 3-4 days to go through whatever it is to be posted. I'll go back to the old format with it. I hope you find it acceptable.
If you send me a private message via email I'll send you an edited copy of Ch 3 part 1 without the 1st. person perspective.
As far as everyone else, let's all calm down and be civil towards each other. Thank you for coming to my defence though it was unnecessary, I get bashed on occasion, I don't like it, but it comes with the territory.
Thank you all for reading my stories.
HGriffin
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThat escalated quickly!
I have no idea who the "anny" referred to is.. nor do I recognise "the asshole" referred to. I have NEVER posted 'shit' to this site.
My original comment (the one I was complaing about being 'lost') was NOT abusive, derogatory, defamatory, author-bashing or harsh in any way whatsoever.
It was well thought out and phrased, spell-checked! and balanced.
I DID NOT think for one moment that the author himself had deleted it. I assumed it was deleted by the site or by a moderator.
My lost comment simply echoed the other comment about the viewpoint switching between first and third person and proferred my opinion that this episode is not as good as the first two.
Expanding on that point, I offered my reasons behind giving this part a lower star-rating than I did the others and expressed my sadness.
This IS a VERY GOOD story... and I DO like it. BUT, it was let down by the lack of consistency in the narration and thus I (personally) could not continue to read it.
Sadly, this episode did not follow in the superbly written footsteps of the first two.
Furthermore... I used an anonymous post because I simply can't be bothered to remember another log in for a site I only visit three or four times a month.
For the record... MY NAME IS STEPHEN.
Perhaps, if you're going to call someone an asshole for posting trash and using an anonymous account you should think about not using the same tactics.
