Long Road Ch. 04

byaka_Mike©

"You should've given her your number," Elvis said from behind me, "kept in touch with her."

"No," I replied as I waved at her. She blew me a kiss before turning back and heading back to her bay, "it has to be this way, brother."

I never heard from her again. I tried to look her up once; it was as if she had disappeared from the face of the earth. For years I still tasted her kisses on my lips, felt her body lying next to me. Sometimes I wonder how things would've played out, how different things would have been if we had tried to stay together, would we have been happy? We would soon load the plane that would take us to Georgia, Fort Benning, where boys come to become men.

"Goodbye, Leyva" I said to myself as the bus pulled away. "Goodbye, my love."

...

"How was the bacon?" Angie asked as she spread herself on my couch. She had complained about not planning to spend the night so she had not brought any clothes, I pointed her to my closet and told her she could wear any of my shirts.

"Good," I said, taking a drag of my post food cigarette. "Really good," I continued when I saw her expression of disappointment. "I am ready for dessert, though" I added with mischief in my voice.

"Shower first," Angie replied with a huge smile in her face, "I do need to get some shower products though. I doubt that you have any girly products here."

"Short of lotion, unfortunately I don't" I replied. She laughed at that comment, my affinition for non-manly lotions was well known, my current lotion was Bed and Body Works' "Baby Honey Suckle," I admit it's a strange habit but I am a fan of the smells. I don't wear cologne, so the lotion is often the only smell that people get when they get near me.

"Ok," she replied, "let me run back and get some stuff and I'll be back." She reached out and grabbed my crotch with one hand while pulling me into a passionate kiss with the other. "Keep this warm for me, lover."

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by davwoo04/30/16

Don't take any shit

Don't take any shit from these porn critics. This is very good writing from your heart and soul. I don't know where it's leading but I am, for one, enjoying the journey. I hate detailed descriptions ofmore...

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by bruce2204/08/16

Sort of like the first book of the Alexandrian Quartet

I find a pleasure putting the pieces together and imagining the connections.
His relationship with women leaves me wondering though how anyone could be so insensitive to pain.

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by gordo1203/04/16

I agree

The transitions are weak. You might have the entire story in your mind but as you're moving from place to place it isn't working out for the reader. I was about to read (?) ch 5 and I still can't quitemore...

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by kjohns200103/02/16

Good story

Good story, mind you, the readers do have to work at keeping the different time lines separate but it's worth it to have a story that makes that extra effort worthwhile.
Please don't let the commentsmore...

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by blackrandl195803/02/16

Okay then

There have been a whole raft of good stories lately that haven't featured a single husband eating a cream pie from a big black bull, not a single husband forced to watch as his wife humiliates him, wheremore...

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