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Friggen cheating Bi. She is not worthy to hold her husband shit.
Writer 4
the flow of story 3
The story 1 I have a bias against cheaters getting away with their perversion.
Overall 2
No Loving wives here, just a cheating bitch, hope she enjoys it till he gets a hotter piece to screw. This was a short and unsatisfying story which, although well written was devoid of any story or depth of involvement for the reader. It was more like a news item than a story. Could have been vaguely acceptable in Erotic Couplings but anyone who write clichéd garbage like this has neither the skil nor imagination to make it work Sorry 1* for the spelling and grammar!
1 star only figure give you that for at least writing something
Don't like cheaters even in stories seen too much heartache caused by it in own family uncles aunts cousins friends if cheating story want revenge and punishment a few reconciliation
While I enjoy a 'quickie' as much as the next person, I think it needed just a bit more buildup of 'tension'... maybe at the most recent poker game (its your story, I'm not trying to tell you how to tell it.)
I liked it. Please don't be discouraged, I gave you a [4]... However, it could have been a (very rare from me) [5] with just a little more. Not even more sex, the sex was great. Just wasn't exactly invested in the characters.
I would have rated it 5***** is if the cock had been 6 or 7 inches. However, 9 inch cocks don't exist and even 8" are extremely rare. Therefore, since the story is impossible, I only rated it 2**.